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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 23 2014 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Homecoming

Nicely riveting. I zipped through the first three chapters without leaving my customary individual reviews! Just one question, though. If he shrank out of his clothes, how come Mrs. Wundt wasn't notified of that by the student, who sits at that lab station, in very next class? You'd think the rumor about a possibly naked Sam, streaking around the school, would spread throughout it faster than light!

Author's Response:

Hi there

The class was empty when Sam shrank. The teachers were probably infromed of Sam's clothes lying on the floor as soon as the next class started. But the news didn't reach Ashley-and thus Sam- the very same day, because the clothes weren't discovered during lunch time and after that AShley attended a class and went straight home. Sam was never seen naked. The only thing out of the ordinary was some pieces of clothing at his lab station. 

They did, however, find all his clothes -underwear included- lying in a classroom, and he wasn't seen changing in the shower or at the gym. So, given his rebelious nature,  they came to thet conclusion that he'd probably been up to no good, like going on a naked streak. it was "the only possible explanation" according to Sam himself.

Reviewer: vgiv Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 15 2014 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Homecoming

I missed this chapter, not to much occured that could not have been spread through the previous chapter and the next.



Author's Response:

true, it links the 2 chapters

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 12 2014 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Homecoming

Awesome... Not as into unaware, hoping the rest of this story goes good!

Author's Response:

hopefully there'll be less unaware stuff now that Sam has been found by Ash! ;)

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