Date: May 15 2017 6:08 AM Title: Collateral Damage
This is some really solid stuff. It's a neat twist on the fairy tale. And speaking of twists, the climax of this chapter was so dark and uncomfortable in the best way, like something out of a horror movie. I like all the little details peppered throughout to flesh out the world. Keep it up.
Author's Response:
The guilt for Mary was incredible for me lol, but i loved writing that scene, had the adrenaline really flowing! Only one chapter to go with this, but I really want to do a Fairy Tale series because of it
Thanks for reading & reviewing ^_^
[Report This]Date: July 06 2015 12:02 PM Title: Collateral Damage
I feel bad about Mary, but you have to do what you have to do. Reflecting back on it, her murder could be taken as a mercy killing, given that if she had returned to the castle she could have died slowly due to multiple beatings, starvation, dysentery, plague, et cetera, et cetera. At the very least, the Bears relieved the woman from a life of being unappreciated by toxic personality bluebloods like Gwen.
Author's Response:
I felt really guilty for doing that with Mary, i honestly did! I was shaking after i finished writing that chapter lol
[Report This]Date: July 05 2015 8:47 PM Title: Collateral Damage
Aww, poor Mary. I think the poster below me missed the reason behind it though, it wasn't to keep thier plan intact for the Princess, but ratehr to avoid the troubles that would have befallen them once the King found out what has been going on.
Very interested in seeing what Catalina has in store for Gwendolyn!
Author's Response:
yeah, most people got that, thankfully, but oh well...
I might put a "graphic content" warning up at the start of the next chapter lol. Catalina has a lot of pent up agression to take out on Gwendoline ;)