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Reviewer: Mr E Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 05 2014 1:03 PM Title: 'Pantie Trap'

My favorite chapter so far. I think you can guess why

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 15 2014 9:58 PM Title: 'Pantie Trap'

Perfect! I hope Julianee walks around with Jim inside her panties in chapter 9.

I cant wait!

Author's Response:

Thanks Tom, but somehow I knew that you'd like it!  Let's see,... next chapter we'll return to check out Sam.  Then either go back to Bill and Valerie, oor maybe Marie might get back into the action first?  I don't know yet,... I've got about half of chap. 8 and it's spinning out pretty quick, but I still have only a rough draft to go by,... and, who knows what will happen after that!   ;`)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 15 2014 12:01 PM Title: 'Pantie Trap'

Yep! Marie is _definitely_ not getting him back...ever.

Author's Response:

Nebber - Nebber - Nebber..... Julia like little Jimmy.  ;`)

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