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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 11 2014 1:16 PM Title: 'Out of Control'

I think these guys are in for a real surprise. I'm curious about their reactions from each guy.

They have their own personality which makes the giantess in control of them going to prefer one or the other.

We know Marie got two more from that alley. I bet one of those feisty little men will anger Marie so much that she will give him to her sister....hehe.

That should soften them up. That's what happened to Jimmy.

I can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response:

That's right, Marie captured two of them under the dumpster in the alley way.... but which two was it?

And, that Federal Agent, with the little search dog?  She found a pair of clothing in the trash can,... but who's clothes was it?

(That accounts for three men, and we know that three more was trapped inside of the cage at the park, and taken to the hospital, but, that leaves 'one' man unaccounted for....who could he be?

 

All these questions, and more, will soon be revealed in the next fascinating installment of 'Determination'.   ;~)

-- Don't worry, Tom.  This will get so much better, after the landing. ;`)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 11 2014 12:36 PM Title: 'Out of Control'

Oh, that Ajet has such a way with words! I would nitpickingly point out that outer space, being a vacuum, the phrase "speed of sound" would be a contradiction in terms. But, as I still sometimes refer to web-surfing as being "on the air," I will refrain from belaboring the obvious. ;-)

P.S.---Scribe and Ommic sound like really stealthy SOB's. ;-D

Author's Response:

I actually concidered that fact but, seeing as how this is set to be in the 'seventies', the speed of sound was a fairly new speed record to break in those days.  Ajet was just using that for a referance point.  He really had no idea, how fast they were actually traveling.  'Just really freakin' Fast Man!'  ;`)

* Yea, Scribe and Ommick are some tough dudes.  I just hope that they can keep it together after the ship lands....

 

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