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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 29 2014 7:06 AM Title: 'Impetuosity'

Latest score from the Out-of-this-World Cup.

Marie: 4

Shrinkies: 0


Next quarter to start off with Jane handing off to Marie. ;-)

Author's Response:

Yes sir!  Marie's got enough little men now to, maybe,... start her own little miniature cleaning crew?  Or, maybe a pit crew for her tired feet?  I don't know what she'll do with all of them, but,... you know it's gonna be fun!  ;`) 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 29 2014 1:47 AM Title: 'Impetuosity'

Haha! My guess was right! It was Carycomic and Gadget!

Man, I can't wait to see what Zena does with Max. At the end of the last chapter, she said that she was going to give him to the researchers, and I hope she changes her mind. :)

Man, I like Jane. Keep that sexy feeling alive. She had those men hanging on those straps. She doesn't even know that Marie brought two more, we'll not yet. :)

Will Julianne be back? she was awesome! If not, I hope Zena does some sexy things similar to Julianna.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Yep, I think you were right!  Those two just keep popping up in this tale.  I wonder what Marie will do about Ajet shooting her in the ankle?  Well, I guess we'll find out a few chapters down the road.  (Maybe she'll just give him to her mother to play with,... Jane's been wanting to have one all to herself,,,)  hee hee..

Oh Yea, Poor Max,... he's gonna have to work now!  Zena likes her toes to be perfect when she's on camera, and wearing her favorite, 'Opened toed' high heels, while doing the news.  And, she also has a thing about 'unwanted' body hair,... I assume that he'll have to take care of that too!

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Next chapter will be a 'flashback' told from 'Billy Bob's' P.O.V., including a narrative of everthing that happened to him, while he was enslaved by Valerie. (The Beauty Salon Manager,).  I'm going to use that as a way to touch on some of the other fetishes that I normally would never include in a story like this,...

Some are just plain disgusting, so be forewarned!  But, they we all be told from Billy's memory of his time spent working for the giantess at the Salon.  It's going to be a long one, and it will touch on several different fetishes....

Not all of them are strange though,... just, very different?

Thanks Tom!  Next chapter, should be a few days away, I'm not sure yet...

 

 

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 28 2014 12:12 PM Title: 'Impetuosity'

I think it was a well written chapter but it kinda felt like a recap of what already happened but from the tinies perspective.



Author's Response:

Yeah, that's what I was trying to do,  I wanted to back up far enough to set the scene, so as not to confuse the reader as to what was taking place.  And, replay the scene from the tiny mens POV.  Only, this time, you had the advantage of 'knowing', who, the tiny men were,...

Thanks for the review Gadget! 

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