First off, Happy Halloween to you too. This chapter wasn't scary, but rather sexy.

However, it wasn't as sexy as I hoped it would be. It seems as if Zena is still trying to prepare Max for his long list of sexual torture.

Zena keeps saying that things are going to happen, and by the time that happens, it's either the end of the chapter or it beings in the next chapter.

Basically, only 2 things really happened in this chapter: Zena removing Max's body hair, and Tina discovering Max's clothes.

You did a good job explaining how Zena is trying to physically and mentally take over Max's mind by being this "goddess". I still think that Max believes that he is held captive be a large beautiful woman, but not to the point where Zena is his goddess. We'll not yet.

She has to break him down first, and you said that putting him in the panty drawer would serve that purpose. However, after losing his body hair, Max now looks at her underwear as comfort, as a blanket. Not as something to break him down.

Also, that paragraph about Zena having all these ideas to make Max an obedient slave, well, those ideas seem to be the same as the ideas of every other giantess in this story. Nothing was new that made me admire Zena any more than the next giantess.

What time is it exactly on this day? Zena woke up at 6:30 am two chapters ago, and they had sex, and Max has been unconscious for 2 hours. Sure they had breakfast, but why is Zena wondering how Max will do in the evening without a checkup when it sounds like it's still the morning? Where did all that time go? A clarification would be nice.

The removal of body hair was a nice touch becuase it gives Max the sense that Zena owns him. And what I mean by that is that he lost his hair, his own unique hair to a giantess who simply wanted Max to look 'cleaner'.

Without hair, Max should be touching something warm at all times, especially since he doesn't have his clothes too. I hope Zena puts Max in some tight, cozy areas that will warm him up.

I think it's time to switch to another giantess for the next chapter. Zena is taking a bit too slow for my taste. Well, that's my opinion. But I hope the next chapter will spice things up.

Author's Response:

Well, I decided to start off slower with Zena,... it seems that alot of the stories that I've read lately, move too quickly into the rough...