[Report This]Date: September 12 2016 10:31 AM Title: The Beginning
I enjoy the Family aspect... great story.
[Report This]Date: July 06 2014 8:08 PM Title: The Beginning
Very good story. Brutal ending.
Like what Wildcat said, A friends mom, a neighbor's mom, his girlfriends mom would have been a better idea. (Its just my opinion.)
I actually enjoyed it a bit better when I imagined that this college kid was a burglar, and he thought there was something valuable in the basement.
Anyway, a great first story. Im a big MILF fan, but not with their own mother kind of story.
Hope you write more wonderful stories. :)
Author's Response:
You're just not into the family aspect i take it? I actually just posted a story about an unaware giantess gf and her mom. There's a little family stuff in it since the gf's brother shrinks with the bf but I think you'd like it.
[Report This]Date: July 06 2014 5:39 PM Title: Finale
Yeah, I'd say that was a bit of a surprize! Nice discriptions. Very easy to visualize. Good development in the begining, too. I really liked the 'adventure' aspect... exploring the house and running for his life!
Very exciting story. I had to imagine that it wasn't really his own mother,though; in order to continue reading, (That kind of thing doesn't really do anything for me) for me, it would have been a lot more comfortable if he had been at the MILF 'next door"s' house... But, anyway... Great stuff Lexy!
Wildcat ;`)
Author's Response:
Even though it's fantasy you just don't like the family aspect?
[Report This]Date: July 06 2014 5:20 PM Title: The Beginning
Well that was a depressing ending.
Author's Response:
Depressing in what sense? That you didn't like how it ended? Or the ending was just sad?