Yeah, I'd say that was a bit of a surprize!  Nice discriptions.  Very easy to visualize.  Good development in the begining, too.  I really liked the 'adventure' aspect... exploring the house and running for his life!

Very exciting story.  I had to imagine that it wasn't really his own mother,though; in order to continue reading, (That kind of thing doesn't really do anything for me) for me, it would have been a lot more comfortable if he had been at the MILF 'next door"s' house... But, anyway... Great stuff Lexy!

Wildcat ;`)