Reviews For Omega: Inheritance
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Reviewer: chrlorez Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 12 2014 5:24 AM Title: Kismet

Ooh! Scandalous!

I see a mystery brewing here, and I getting very intrigued by Lexi's past. I think a ghost from her past has come back to haunt her. It's a good read.



Author's Response:

Thanks very much for reading. A ghost from her past is indeed on the haunt.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 07 2014 5:09 PM Title: Kismet

This is a heartwarming chapter, and when we get back to the present, their interaction will be much more emotionally powerful.

@AdamX: Most of this site is porn, but sometimes people decide to submit fine literature here. It's the reason I haven't left entirely.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! The next chapter in particular showing their next interaction will hopefully do just that.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 07 2014 1:28 PM Title: Kismet

This chapter really shows that these two had common ground and became good friends! Which is why whats happening in the present is such a shame!



Author's Response:

A very bittersweet moment. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 07 2014 10:49 AM Title: Kismet

This story regardless of the person writing always has those heart tugging chapters and this was one of them.

 

An incredible feat on a site basically founded on posting stories for people to shoot loads to.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! I had hoped this chapter would be viewed as such.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 07 2014 7:55 AM Title: Kismet

"Never have to be afraid again" indeed.
Great chapter.

aaron

Author's Response:

Heh. Oh, mean irony. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: KazumaR1 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 07 2014 7:29 AM Title: Kismet

A good chapter, a much needed chapter. In fact I think this chapter should have come earlier as now we have a good idea why Bridget is going to the lengths she is to find out why her friend is allegedly accused of hurting those betas. I think this chapter retroactively humanizes Bridget a bit, more than the work chapter did. 

 



Author's Response:

Good to know it helped soften your view of Bridget. I actually had hoped this one would stand in contrast to the previous chapter, since the last one wasn't necessarily meant to humanize Bridget, but at least give the impression that she's conflicted on it all. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: September 07 2014 6:57 AM Title: Kismet

Well I wish I knew what exactly happened to Lexi in the subway but this is  tender moment. 



Author's Response:

There will be more background on what happened prior to this event later in the story.

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