Reviewer: NightEye Signed [Report This]
Date: September 19 2014 10:47 AM Title: Cold

@Naoru : I may have been confused by this sentence :

" his was just the price she promised herself she would pay in favor of abandoning her principles, and she was paying it in full."

I thought the principles she was abandoning were sticking to the truth instead of caving. Then, the next few sentences could be taken as Lexi mentally breaking, taking the lie as her new truth and rolling with it.

Now that you mention it, I'm probably wrong, that would be too dark, even for this story. :P

Author's Response:

I recognize it's a semi-clunkily worded sentence.  It's meant to read that Lexi refuses to lie, even if it would ease her physical pains, because it's so important to her.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18 2014 5:54 PM Title: Cold

Great chapter

Author's Response:

Thanks man

Reviewer: aaron Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18 2014 12:27 PM Title: Cold

Very powerful chapter. I honestly can't see how things can ever be the same between these two.(unless that was your intent) Things will certainly be throw asunder if/when the poor beta girl awakens from her coma.

Aaron
PS in this universe are their any cases of Omegas using their size like the alphas use it against the betas? Or just the omegas acting superior towards smaller sized races?

Author's Response:

It's no spoiler to say things won't exactly be the same by the end, regardless of who knows the truth.  And that's a good guess about the beta girl.

There are no such cases with Omegas using their size intentionally for harm.  They're all about trying to keep things equal and peaceful.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18 2014 11:17 AM Title: Cold

Wow, as expected this chapter makes my guts churn. Im not sure Lexi is gonna come out of this a sane person, I would say that most people would even lie just to make the situation easier on themselves...

Author's Response:

Probably a fair assumption that she might try that.  There are still complications to come (some in the next chapter, even) that may offer some hope...