Reviews For Omega: Inheritance
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Reviewer: KazumaR1 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 27 2014 6:17 AM Title: Surrogate

And now the plot thickens! Irrationality and hatred is a volatile cocktail and Nathaniel downed the whole glass to even come up with such a heinous plot to frame Alexandra. I hope he answers for his crimes. For now I'll ponder what Aegis even does with beta criminals or will he be handed over to alpha courts. 

 



Author's Response:

Nathaniel not only downed it, he set it on fire. All I'll say is that Aegis does indeed have an answer to every injustice.

Reviewer: chrlorez Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2014 2:03 AM Title: Surrogate

Hah! I knew what was going on before, but this is confirming my suspicions. I'm not going to say, in case I am right, but all I'm saying is that it involves ghosts of Alexandra's past and the name of the worst Classic Doctor Who episode of all time.



Author's Response:

Those ghosts of Alexandra's past are going to be shown a little more clearly next chapter. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: MostKnownUnknowns Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2014 12:02 AM Title: Surrogate

Finally. I was going crazy until this chapter. Expose this so we can see how the Omegas remorse and realize they aren't perfect. Will be a very interesting dynamic between a few characters when it comes out..



Author's Response:

I hope it doesn't disappoint in that department. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: MrSirk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2014 8:31 PM Title: Surrogate

HAHAHAHAHAHAH!....heh..Beta's are jackasses. 

I kind off wandered if beta's were more than just the innocent victims they're made out to be. It doesn't excuse all the horrors enacted against them but it's nice to finaly see some grey area. How ironic is it that the biggest most powerful faction is being so expertly manipulated by the smallest "weakest" one? 



Author's Response:

Irony in its purest form. It is important to note that these Betas are in the minority, and most really are just normal people trying to heal from their victimized past. Nathaniel and his friends are just taking it a few steps further.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2014 4:51 PM Title: Surrogate

I knew it! Well had a strong feeling anyways that Bridge was telling the truth, it seems every universe etc has their own...I don't want to say Isis style militants but anarchists might fit better here. Hopefully justice is done.



Author's Response:

Interesting parallel.  I'm not sure I'd quite call the Betas anarchists, since they do believe there should be structure, but Nathaniel is definitely unhappy with the one in place now.  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Kusanagi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2014 3:20 PM Title: Surrogate

Kind of embarrassed I didn’t figure it out sooner. Kept coming up with more elaborate ways she could have been framed without coming to the obvious. I just couldn’t come up with a reason why betas would hurt themselves like that but this definitely went a long way toward explaining things (including the title of the story.)



Author's Response:

It definitely takes very firm belief in a cause to do what these Betas did to themselves. And this chapter was certainly meant to finally define the title, in more ways than one.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2014 2:54 PM Title: Surrogate

Damn, Nathaniel is a bitter one. Ending with a veiled order to commit suicide by overdose topped it off nicely.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading/reviewing!

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 25 2014 2:09 PM Title: Surrogate

Damn, so the truth is finally revealed to us, the audience. Now we KNOW she didn't do it. So now we are in the grueling process of hoping that the truth comes out for Aigis to see before it's too late!



Author's Response:

It is indeed.  And there are just 5 chapters left, so things are coming to a head soon.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: September 25 2014 1:37 PM Title: Surrogate

Knew it, evil Betas working some revenge plan. This universe makes my blood boil.  



Author's Response:

Well, that was certainly the intent!

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