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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 27 2014 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 2: Monica

Not bad! Just some additional trivia you might find interesting. A roan horse is one that usually has an intermingling of silvery white hairs among a predominantly darker color. So, I'm now assuming that the "dark horse" mentioned in chapter 1 might be a dark blue roan (rather than a basic black one). As for the Mason-Dixon Line? That was originally the boundary line between Maryland and Pennsylvania, as established by two surveyors of those names back in the mid-1700's (when the first 13 States were still British colonies). But, of course, by the 1860's, it had acquired its presently much broader meaning. Which is, basically, every state between--and southward of--the Mississippi, Ohio, and Potomac Rivers.

Author's Response: Thanks for the awesome trivia.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: July 24 2014 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 2: Monica

 You might want to improve your spacing, its hard to read. I am curious to see where this is going, you got me interested. 



Author's Response:

Ok, I will adjust my spacing. Yeah I tried to put an intersting spin on the introduction of the GTS Monica. As it goes along she will have a "bigger" role. * Funny pun.

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