Reviewer: stargate1990 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 03 2014 9:24 AM Title: 1 ticket for a shrunken person

I agree with that most of the reviewers have said.  But there stars ratings are extremly harsh.  Your storys are very good they have the potential to be amazing.  Like the one review said you should write out the chapter and then go back and add a 2-3 sentences for each one.  Your storys are good but they need the added detail and you need to beef them up.  I look forward to reading your storys, but they're so short it only takes a couple of minutes.  I'm looking forward to more from you and possibly some re-edit of your previous storys!