Date: May 22 2017 6:54 PM Title: Don't be an asshole to your sister. (Part 1!)
I do'nt like transformation stories,when it is one sided it's not interesting,when one person is unaware and the other is that makes a story boring
Date: October 22 2014 8:09 PM Title: Don't be an asshole to your sister. (Part 1!)
Shrink High.
Date: September 02 2014 4:05 AM Title: Don't be an asshole to your sister. (Part 1!)
Oh god, this story is lovely, it's amazing and this site needs more dirty ass material, hope this is heading to more gassy material and maybe some scat, I think you should just do what you love however but for opinion or suggestion? Personally I'd love some more prolonged torture, he's durable after all lol. But i'd love to see him tossed into a pile of dog shit by the end of that hell, quick place to drop him off when you wanna end the story pft, but can't wait to read more no matter what you choose c:
Author's Response:
I know, right? Barely anybody gets into the nitty-gritty dirty stuff. I'm kind of having a hard time coming up with good ways to describe stuff because I can count on one hand the times I've seen it done well. Don't worry, though, it'll get dirty. And don't get worried when the first ass scene is over, I'll be coming back to it. :D Don't think he'll end up in dog shit, though. Girl shit is more my thing. XP I'll think you'll like the next chapter though, and it won't be long~!
Date: August 27 2014 9:16 PM Title: Don't be an asshole to your sister. (Part 1!)
I love ass play! I just wish it was with Karin instead. I felt like you were setting up for her too since you talked about her slightly sizeable ass.
Any chance he'll be visiting her ass next? Maybe Olivia's is just like beginner level stuff by only being trapped in her crack with her asshole. But Karin is like level two by having to take a trip UP her ass, or by her finding him and deciding that since she can STILL remember how bad her asshole hurt after all those laxatives that it was finally time for him to kiss it and make it feel better, or something. Just spitballin' :)
Author's Response:
You and me both. Don't worry, he'll be getting a piece of every girl's ass, in time. I'm an ass man myself, so that's where he'll end up more often than not. After this, maybe some foot stuff... Then he'll get an even worse piece of Karin's ass. ;) Good ideas, too. Not sure if I'll keep this unaware or not, but if not I'll probably go with that. Thanks! ;P
[Report This]Date: August 27 2014 6:50 AM Title: Don't be an asshole to your sister. (Part 1!)
Looking great so far, keep it up! Can't wait to see what happens to him in the next piece!
I saw your review on my story, thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thanks for checking out my story! Glad you liked it. Can't wait to see your next chapter.
[Report This]Date: August 27 2014 3:10 AM Title: Don't be an asshole to your sister. (Part 1!)
Absolutely loved this chapter. You go as far as you want with the ass stuff.
Author's Response:
Will do!