[Report This]Date: August 12 2013 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
One of the best stories on this web sight.
[Report This]Date: January 03 2013 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
This story was absolutely amazing, a truly amazing piece. Sheer genius. An amazing job, my favourite story!
Date: December 31 2012 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
It is the best story I've read on this website rigt along side Friends With Benefits. The feet portions are just amazing although the whole torture kinda made me sick a bit but still an amazing story with how can I forget the beautiful feet of Suzy. Love it!
Date: November 29 2012 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
Cayce, I've not read all your reviews. So I hope That I'm not just repeating anothers praise for you. You have written a masterpeice, with this awlsome fantasy! I am now tryin ta write something with the same flavor..... and exsquisite style. The well formed discriptions, and methodically played out senerio's, makes it easy to imagine being a miniature man. The erotic aspect, was overwhelming for me. The far corners of my minds, dusty shelves, were blown clean, and reignighted!
Your hard work has given me a new spark, and I just wanted to thank you for that!
THANK-YOU!
P.S. Keep on spinning the fantasy!
Author's Response: Thanks, Cat! Looking forward to reading your stuff! I'm off to check out The Shack now :-)
[Report This]Date: November 28 2012 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
Let me start off by saying that I completely, 100% agree with everything The GTS Reviewer said. You might as well re-read his review because everything I'm going to say builds off of it.
The plot and the characters are engaging and believable, not to mention cohesive (a rarity on this site). All the necessary plot threads are played out and closed, leaving just enough open and dangling all the way to the fantastic final chapter. I am at once left with feelings of satisfaction as well as yearning: satisfaction with the way things turned out, and yearning for more. And of course, the GTS sequences were sexy and well-written. The GTS Reviewer pointed out that, for the story's length, one might expect you to include more variety with less emphasis on feet. I agree, and the foot thing does start to get repetitive (it's a little odd that there's so many women in the same area with the same sexual fixation on Ray), but I'll give you credit since the sequences are written so well.
But the most compelling part of your story is your protagonist's self-awareness and insight. Constantly, he is asking questions of himself--and of the reader--as he probes his own sexual identity, as any teenager would do. Simultaneously, he faces (rather realistically) the psychological scarring of molestation, the reconciliation of his submission fetish with rape, and the struggle for survival when instant death hounds him at every turn. There's a delicious sort of irony in Ray's admission that the fantasy is nothing like the reality--that being dominated in the way Ray imagined is actually a lot more humiliating, scary, and life-threatening if one were actually three inches tall, when in fact his situation is the reader's fantasy, and the reader's reality is most likely a lot safer and less "exciting."
The truth is, you've spoiled me, Cayce. For me, there was always an invisible barrier between GTS fiction and literary fiction. I'd always believed there were only two kinds of GTS fiction writers: those who neglected the story, using it only as a thin justification for the fantasy elements to play out, and those who (intentionally or not) abandoned it altogether to craft a comedic or ridiculous series of escapades. The plot, and even the quality of writing, was always secondary. I thought I'd never find a GTS fiction writer who set the plot on equal terms with the fantasy, but here you've done it, introducing to us the union of intellectual and erotic entertainment, of plot and fantasy; and what's more, you turn the fantasy inward, exploring the psychological implications in a way that is simply fascinating. Usually I read a GTS story for the GTS parts, but I found myself reading your story for the plot, for the characters, for the writing... and of course, for the GTS parts also.
The tragedy of this story is that it will never escape the confines of this site, or the GTS community. I echo the sentiment of another reviewer that, were it not for the GTS content, it'd be awesome to see this published. But hell, if that Twilight fanfiction tripe "Fifty Shades of Grey" can sell, so could "Homunculus."
Author's Response: Wow. Thanks for such an amazing and thoughtful review, Science! First off, I'll cop to the the whole repetitive foot thing. That's definitely my kink, and what inspires me to crank out another chapter. But I tend to agree with most folks... when I go back and reread it, it does feel sort of repetitive and a bit hackneyed. I guess such is the risk of publishing a long work gradually over several months (or, in this case, years). But I still love this story, and I'm quite proud of the way it turned out (for the most part). I started writing with nothing more than a vague of idea of a plot (wicked stepmom, bullying stepsister, etc.), but once I found myself identifying with the character, I felt like it needed to be more than that. I love the GTS stuff, but my favorite authors have always been those who write beyond it and craft amazing stories (DX Machina, Nemo, and the long, lost Brandford, just to name a few). I appreciate you putting me a cut above E.L. James. I doubt I'll ever come out of the GTS closet to try and publish this stuff, but I'll certainly continue to contribute at the snail's pace I have so far ;-) Thanks again!
Date: September 12 2012 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
I have to say, you are an amazing writer. You inspired ME to write stories as well. thank you for the inspiration. By the way, this story is so good, I find myself reading it over and over, maybe because i'm like ray? Well, just to sum it up, you are awesome, keep writing, please.
Author's Response: Thanks, Julianz! I admit I haven't read your stuff yet, but it definitely looks up my alley. I'll correct that oversight immediately :-)
[Report This]Date: May 16 2012 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is by far one of the most creative and well developed stories that i have read so far. Keep up the great writting.
[Report This]Date: April 29 2012 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
first story i read on site
[Report This]Date: July 29 2011 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
I really like this story. It kept me interrested. Hope you make more stories like this.
Date: May 30 2011 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
Cayce this is the GREATEST story
I have read in years!I beg you to make a sequel.PLEEEEEEASE!!
[Report This]Date: May 19 2011 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
omg please contine this story mate i got to have more your so Awesome !!!
[Report This]Date: February 19 2011 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 1
I was blown away by this story. The writing was of such high calibre and the plot was gripping even outside the macro content. What particularly stood out for me was that there were no clear villains, everyone had a reason for acting the way they did (cruel or not).
Date: January 28 2011 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
Cayce, When are you gunna give us the one in the shoe store? Im really looking forward too it!
Author's Response: I was joking when I said that, I'm afraid. Guess it's hard to tell sometimes. Sorry I got your hopes up =(
[Report This]Date: December 03 2010 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
Easily one of the best stories on this site. im only on chapter 15 but thats beacause every time i take a break form the story i reread the old chapters to keep it fresh in my memory.
a sequel would be cool but another original idea woould be better in my opinion
Date: November 28 2010 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hey Cayce, Just wondering when your coming out with the new story in the shoe store?
Date: July 25 2010 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
I loved it But try to put more Bigh heels on your story
Author's Response: I'll set the next one in a shoe store. How's that?
[Report This]Date: January 05 2010 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
man you really out did yourself! You know how to pull someone in don't you? Anyway greatest story evar!?!
Author's Response: I appreciate that! It was my first and still my favorite =)
[Report This]Date: May 15 2009 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
Man this is great, it's hot and yet it has a plot which keeps you reading and reading, read it in one sitting it was GREAT!
Author's Response: Wow. I can't even read it in one sitting, and I wrote the damn thing. Thanks, SB. Glad you liked it!
Date: December 06 2008 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
Dude that was amazing. It's discribed perfectly. Every foot scene, even walking was so discriptive. It go me into the stroy, and i felt Ray's pain. You should cntinue to write more stories here on GIANTESS PLANET. Thank you for being apart of this.
NITROTIX
Author's Response: If I didn't write so damned slowly, I totally *would* write more stories here on GIANTESS PLANET. I've got one more planned after I finish my current one (Summer Job). After that, who knows? I'll probably be in my nineties. Glad you liked it, Nitrotix. Thanks!