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Reviewer: bailey69 Signed star [Report This]
Date: May 17 2017 4:21 PM Title: The experiment

I would have liked it but you had to have the bro and sis hate each other why do that that ruind the story for me,why are brothers alwas the bully.

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Date: October 30 2016 1:27 PM Title: The owner

More,more,more!!!!! Please this is doing a good job.

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Date: October 30 2016 1:27 PM Title: The owner

More,more,more!!!!! Please this is doing a good job.

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Date: December 12 2014 3:45 AM Title: The experiment

Meant to say CHAPTERS*** cause I hope this story lasts a while!!

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Date: December 12 2014 3:44 AM Title: The experiment

Wow!! The story gets better and better!!! Now since his own mother has forgotten his existence.. Wouldn't it be totally cruel if his sister somehow convinced their mother (or should I say just her mother now) to put her brother in the mothers ass and fart on her own son and see what that would be like?? Sounds like A real mother and daughter bonding experience to me!! Gonna be a gassy life for our hero!! Haha that's just my opinion!! That's what I'd like to see!! Bring on the farts!!!! Keep the chapter long and detailed though!! I give this story and 11!!

Reviewer: Devoool Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 11 2014 9:36 PM Title: The experiment

I think I'll love what is comming next!!! I hope she jam him right up her ass and let him live there and survive on her shit >:)

He didn't throw up when he ate her shit right? he meant to be in an ass :P


Did Erica gave Tilly some shrinking potion other than the potion that makes others forget about the shrinkees? I can imagine the face of her brother when he suddnly see another face pop in through her asshole and jammed right in with him :P


I can't wait to see what'll happen next I like where this is going!

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Date: December 11 2014 9:24 PM Title: The experiment

Nice stuff

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Date: November 28 2014 4:40 PM Title: The slave

Great story!I look forward to see what will happen.

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Date: November 27 2014 10:14 PM Title: The slave

Well done, looks like rising action is underway! I look forward to the arrival of the next chapters!

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Date: November 27 2014 10:09 PM Title: The test

It's very unclear when the shrinking actually takes place here or what causes the shrinking to occur. Given the scientific environment, I assume it would be chemical related.

Being restricted to only one character's perspective could possibly smother a lot of their potential for individual development.

Don't mind me too much, looks like the story is moving at an entertaining pace! :]

Author's Response: Glad to hear you think so. I have been known for rushing a few stories in the past.

Author's Response: Glad to hear you think so. I have been known for rushing a few stories in the past.

Reviewer: soniti54 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 27 2014 9:55 PM Title: The experiment

Good introduction! The circumstances placing the characters in this predicament felt fluid and fitting.

I look forward to seeing how the story picks up!

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Date: November 24 2014 9:12 PM Title: The experiment

YESSSS!! It went the way I wanted it to go!! Farting and all hahaha!! I'll always be checking to see if this story is updated!! Now the story is a 12 out of 10!! More booty!! And the bootys function haha

Author's Response: Thanks for that it means a lot! I've noticed that you've become a big fan of my stories. Cheers!!

Author's Response: Thanks for that it means a lot! I've noticed that you've become a big fan of my stories. Cheers!!

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Date: November 23 2014 12:54 PM Title: The test


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Date: November 22 2014 6:27 PM Title: The experiment

Please keep this going!! I really want this story to continue!! It's an 11/10 in my book!! Love the butt of the giantess and all that comes with it!! Haha can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Author's Response: Thanks and sorry I kept you waiting!

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