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Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 30 2014 11:15 PM Title: Awakening

I dont know what it is about this story that just pulls me in but I can't seem to stop reading. Fantastic job. I live this story. And I normally hate vore type stuff.
Finally know her name and her boyfriend. This is shaping up quite nicely. Can't wait to see what happens next.

aaron

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: September 30 2014 9:37 PM Title: Awakening

Jessica is a nice name. Dustin Hoffins? Is he related to Dustin Hoffman.

I get why he won't even want to come near Jessica, she will likely be hurting and if there is one person she'd want to eat, it'll be him. However, he can offer her a way out, a way to avoid the bomb. 

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