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Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 30 2014 2:10 PM Title: Coming Home

I kinda wish she hadn't killed her dad do soon. She could've gotten more use out of him as a slave. Can't wait to see what she does with this new friend and her mom next.

aaron

Author's Response:

Your note about her dad kind of made it into chapter 3, or at least influenced a part.
Thanks for the comment. 

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 30 2014 2:35 AM Title: Coming Home

Loving it!

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