Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26 2015 11:20 PM Title: The Good, The Bad, and The Bully

So far, I've loved every chapter you released,so you do appear to be on the right track. I still like the characters and although you've brought in terrorists and mysterious organisations, the story is still simple enough to follow. 

 Amy crying again? I hope she doesn't take it too hard, she loves the guys at GIANT and they love her too, no one is to blame for it. I find scenes with a crying giantess almost heartwarming, that the big 'monster' having feelings still makes for good reading. 

The three boys better hurry , Betty will suspect something is up although when they first ran inot Kurt, I thought it was Amy since that was the only solid wall of muscle I knew of.

 

  You mentioned you were fussing over the  details of this story. From what I've learned so far, stick to what you know best and as long as you do that, you ought to be fine. If you want to venture off it, you can always read up and try to go from there, or bounce ideas off someone but most of us seem to operate on our own, finding an editor is not easy here.