Date: November 07 2014 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hmm . . . something nagging at the back of my head tells me that there will be another occasion where Claire/Seth is required to shrink, and Autumn won't restrain her curiosity as much. This will probably lead to a gender reveal, and thus the part of the story where things get steamy, awkward, or depressing, depending on the angle.
Don't mind me, just speculating.
In any case, great so far.
Author's Response:
Thank you for responding again!
You may be right, but we will not know until I write it :D
Date: November 04 2014 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
Looking good so far. The premise is likable, the characters look good . . . Let's hope they stay that good!
Seriously though, continue this. I know as well as anyone how much it suckered to go with few reviews, so here I am to encourage you to GO FOR IT! (I really need to stop hanging around Drac, it isn't good for me . . .)
Author's Response:
Ha! Yes, let us both hope they stay likeable!
Thank you very much for reviewing! If writing were a fire, reviews are the fuel that makes it burn brighter and faster :]
Date: November 03 2014 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
This seems like a very interesting idea. Its a great introduction to the world and the main character, and her gift. I'm very interested to see where you take things from here.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for reading and reviewing!
I have tons of plans for my characters! It shall quite the adventure :]