[Report This]Date: July 02 2017 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
By my count there are 15 contractions in this entire story:
don't x 6
that's x 3
let's x 2
that'd x 1
needn't x 1
I'll x 1
what's x 1
[Report This]Date: July 02 2017 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
I have one word for you: contractions. Seriously, you need to use words like "you're," "can't," and stuff like that, otherwise you sound like a robot.
PS: If you are a robot, please spare me in your eventual takeover of the Earth.
Date: August 01 2015 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
Really hope to see some more chapters
[Report This]Date: July 24 2015 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 1
What a super interesting world about size classes and the change for Hadley and Isabelle in S Class and Isabelle in F class. What a fun world this is.
Date: April 19 2015 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 1
Any plans to update soon? :)
Date: January 14 2015 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
Yes, we were all waiting for it to come but you made it faster than I would've think ! :D Like Aaron, I'm dyeing to see Eva's reaction !! :D
And for the F class doctor, I'm wondering if he's here for Hadley...or for someone else ! ..I'm thinking of Eva for example... X)
Anyway, don't wanna influence what you've planned ! Please keep it up, I'm watching for the afterpart !! :D And thank you by the way !!!
Date: January 14 2015 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
@faintsmile. Thanks a lot. That really helped clear things up. I was assuming that's what was going on, but wasn't sure.
Date: January 13 2015 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
@Faintsmile. Social classes... Mainly how they have the technology to get hardly to the size she is at the end of the chapter, but nobody else seems to be using it in society... I remember it being briefly explained a few chapters back, but not in any great detail.
Guess I'll have to wait to find out!
Keep up the great writing.
Author's Response:
I will give a straightforward recap of what I have previously stated (as anything I detailed before I had to do within dialogue, which is more convoluted): The process of shrinking uses the mass in one's body as part of the energy consumed in the process. Growing, however, requires not only the offset mass to be provided, but immense amounts of additional energy. Thus, growing costs SIGNIFICANTLY more than shrinking, which basically pays for itself. So, almost no one can afford the process of growth, let alone living as S class.
I hope that helps :] I know that I have some dialogue planned that may help even more, but we shall see.
Date: December 21 2014 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
I felt Isabelle's reveal could have been done later, get more bad blood going between the girls but again, you prove to have made things more interesting. Understanding through Immersion is getting me all curious, hope to see more!
Author's Response: I wish I could have waited longer, but for the story to move forward, I needed it to happen. Isabelle is not about to just switch to being buddy buddy, so hopefully things remain interesting on that front :) I am glad I am getting people interested with the Understanding Through Immersion!
Date: December 20 2014 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
@faintsmile. Interesting ..., can't wait to see what you have planned out!
Date: December 20 2014 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting chapter. Seems as if isibelle isn't as bad as I thought...Or is she?
As for the "teaching methods", could this maybe be where Hadly finally meets a guy? Ossubly a partner for her field work?
as for Eva, would certainly complicate things, but, as other readers said, maybe she'll take a liking to Hadly's brother?
Author's Response:
Or is she?! Ha! I like the way you think!
I have the "teaching methods" planned :} I have also begun planning romance possibilities and I hope you enjoy them. There will be no boys in the next chapter, but maybe the one following :3
Date: December 16 2014 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
Will we see Hadley's family again? I think her upper class hating brother could do with getting a love from a giantess.
Author's Response:
My short answer is yes. My long answer will come in the chapters I write :}
Date: December 08 2014 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
@dood07. Maybe one of them likes a boy, and the other (either Hadley or Eva) has feelings for the other girl?
Author's Response:
Ho ho, now you all plan to tag-team me? I see how it is! >.>
Perhaps I shall grant this desire, but know, it would come at a cost! *eerie music* SLOWBURN.
[Report This]Date: December 08 2014 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
Thank you for this chapter !
Firt of all, I would like to let you know that your response to my last review really pleased me ! It's you who's taking your time to share this beautiful story, and you're thanking me for reviewing ^^
Anyway, it was cool to come back in the school, hope there'll be more interactions with other students ! ;) Also, the idea of Eva's fear (giving her power) is a good one, very interesting ! She must control herself ant it explains her deameanor since the beginning of the story.
For my part, I so would like to see a love relation between Headley and Evangeline... *.* I was sensing it when Eva was playing basketball and she was giving more attention to Headley than the play..
Again, thanks for the chapter ! Good luck for the suit ! :D
Author's Response:
:D
I am glad you enjoyed the chapter! And I always enjoy your reviews!
Eva is certainly allowing herself to be defined by her fear. I find it sad, but I believe that Hadley balances her nicely :}
It would seem a number of people are pushing for this sort of thing, lol. Perhaps with enough encouragement, I will see 'reason' ;)
Date: December 07 2014 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
@faintsmile, that sounds like a pretty cool idea, but I think it'd be great to see T least one of them meet a guy while still in school. Maybe Hadley likes a guy her own size, or just one class above, but the guy's going after Eva?
If you're not sure about how long you want to take this, maybe divide it up into different stories; this one focusing on the two girls in their younger years (17/18-21), then have the next one focus on the girls as more mature adults?
Idk, just my two cents... Some of which is probably a bit skewed from me writing my own mixed sized story lol.
Anyway, wgatever you decide, good luck!
Author's Response:
I will see what I can do :}
I was actually considering making the story of them being older a sequel to this one. I do not know that I could have the patience to write a full four to five years of their life without a timeskip, lol
Thank you very much for your input! And thank you for continuing to read!
Date: December 07 2014 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
@faintsmile, I totally understand if you don't want the story to go in that direction, but reading back through the reviews, it seems like quite a few people are supporting the idea :)
Either way, can't wait to see how things turn out!
Any idea as to when the next chapter wi be out?
Author's Response:
Mmm, that they are. Are you among those supporting the idea?
I know that if I have the time / energy / patience for the long haul, my ultimate plan is to move beyond Eva and Hadley's high school year, to when they are in their twenties (spoiler alert: neither dies before finishing high school). With that being said, I do not know that romance would happen during the high school segment, but I would be more inclined to include it in their future.
As for the next chapter, I am cursed with perfectionism and a meticulous mind. I work fairly slowly and sometimes it is hard to truly gauge these things. I hope to never make the wait more than a week, if I can at all help it, but I make no promises.
Date: December 07 2014 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
Nice touch, really shows how committed Hadley is to rising beyond her class. Eva, not so much but I wonder if giantess morning breath is a thing here.
Author's Response:
Haha! Damn, I had actually meant to put something in there about that. Guess I will have to leave that for another time :3
Thank you for the review!
[Report This]Date: December 04 2014 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow.. I swear this chapter is one of the most interesting I've ever read on gtw !! I so liked it, the story makes me wonder about our society, and the possibility that it could have been like this.. So real, so living, so sad and beautiful in the meantime. It gives me the envy to hope that things can change, and I definitely hope it will.
Great explanations, great background, great characters, great plot... It's time you give us some great action, and this story will finally be a masterpiece !
Thank you so much, your work is awesome. Please keep us enjoying this, and good luck !!
Author's Response:
Dood, you are a fantastic reviewer! Thank you so much for each of your reviews!
I have been working on chapter 7, trying to get the tone just right, and I am hoping to post it within the next day or two!
Again, thank you so much for reviewing! It is reviews like yours that make me want to write :}
Date: November 22 2014 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
Thanks you faintsmile for help, I look for the next chapter deeply!
Author's Response: Glad I could help! :} And I am glad you are looking forward to new chapters!
Date: November 21 2014 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
Jazeera and Eva have issues, Hadley and James have their own problems, engaging enough to keep me interested, can't wait to see all these subplots resolved. Also, will Hadley's tormentors be back? Or is Jazeera so scary they've vowed never to try and mess with the little one again?
Author's Response:
Mmm, people are not perfect, I guess. I am glad it is keeping you interested!
Oh, tormentors never disappear. They just plot and stew before making a devistating reentry into their victim's life. Hadley has not seen the last of hers :(