Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 21 2014 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 1

Interesting story but as non-english reader I need to clarify to understand it fully.

if i read well, Hadley is living in a 2 story apartment building made for H class people but it's ajusted to receive K and F class people as well. the landlord (scott's) live in higher apartment and the others in the lower one.

But i didn't understand if rails made K & F class are everywhere (residential area and inside apartment. Can you help me?, Please

Author's Response:

Not a problem :) It is a bit hard to explain in the narrative, so I totally understand.

All of the buildings in the mixed residential district were originally built for S class residents (prior to people shrinking). So the apartment is an S class building redesigned to house the Scott's upstairs and a community of about 100 K and F class families downstairs. Eva and Jaz can fit in the building because it is still built to their proportions (doors, hallways, and such).

The mixed residential district is a short walk from the central market for an S class person. The streets are no longer safe for cars, so they were repurposed, train tracks being laid down. The train cars are designed for H class passengers, but an S class person could fit. On the side of each train car are smaller cars, situated closer to the ground. These are built for K and F class use. When the train stops, the smaller cars are positioned in front of each community house. There, smaller rails are designed to help deal with the fact that K and F class residents could not climb the front steps or open the doors. The rail leads straight into the kitchen of the downstairs apartment, going only that short distance. These smaller rails are not available everywhere, just for community houses. The larger rails connect most of the residential districts.

I hope this helps some. Feel free to ask for more clarification :}

Reviewer: dood07 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 19 2014 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 1

Such a good story !! I so love what you're writting, and I hope you'll keep us enjoying this ! The evil part of the story is important for me, because it's thanks to this that we have such great feelings towards the characters. I'm fond of gentle stories when there are mean moments, and meanwhile the hero has someone who looks for him/her (I don't know if I'm understandable because I'm French, it's hard to express my thoughts :S).  

Anyway, please continue what you're doing, I'm gonna watch for the afterpart !!

Author's Response: Thank you so very much for reviewing! I understand what you are saying, so not to worry :) I have a little more than half of the next chapter written, so I hope to have it out today, at some point!

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: November 12 2014 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 1

Intersting world you have here! And of course, the vast majority of the wealthy are complete assholes for no good reason...

Author's Response: Ain't that always the way :( Thank you for your review! :)

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed [Report This]
Date: November 12 2014 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 1

Seems like a great start so far! Will there be any guys in the story later on?

Author's Response: Quite possibly, but it honestly depends on how in depth I make this story. I have been influenced by the Omega series, by Ackbar, and the story Jacksmith did to add to that series, so if my inspiration grants me the tools, I will certainly have a grand cast of many genders, classes, and the combinations that stem from them. I am gland you are enjoying the story so far! Thanks for reviewing!