Date: December 01 2014 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 6
Good informative chapter, I hope to see more soon!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing! I hope to get a new chapter out soon!
Date: December 01 2014 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 6
Really enjoying this. So nice to see a laid back slice-of-life story that focuses on two differently sized people being friends. Keep up the good work and can't wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for keeping with the story this far! I do so enjoy a little slice-of-life.
Date: December 01 2014 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 6
Great to finally hear the story behind the classes a bit more. Hopefully we'll get to see more of the school/students later on.
Author's Response:
We will be seeing the school, most definitely :}
Thank you for reviewing!
Date: December 01 2014 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 6
Great piece of exposition, were you inspired by Omega? I am not a fan of the series but Jazeera's past is interesting and reveals the many flaws of the world and even makes Eva rather unique, the first child born to a G class individual.
Author's Response: Hmm, I did take some inspiration, mostly the mixed size world scenario. I picked up Jacksmith's Omega story first and then read Ackbar's work. I found myself wishing that their stories spent more time addressing the way the world's system was so flawed and I guess that is really what inspired this piece. While I was writing this chapter, I found myself wanting to write a side story for Jazeera and Ambrose, but I am hesitant about derailing myself, lol
Date: December 01 2014 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 6
Interesting exposition. That explains quite a bit about the world established. Good story.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad I managed to keep things interesting :)