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Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 16 2015 10:19 AM Title: Not so happy ending

I think it was a good ending that I hope leads to a sequel or Epilogue chapter. Some loose ends need tying I believe. Like Megan researching Magic does she find anything? If not maybe a few sentences about Rosie's final spell being a memory wipe on the family. Or maybe Megan tries to battle Rosie with some magic she learned but has no chance and joins Paul in his fate! Just constructive criticism as I loved the story, ending just felt like more needs to be added!

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