Date: January 03 2019 4:57 PM Title: Let's destroy them together!
Okay so, the part where the planet becomes one millimeter big really facinated me, because that would mean one single skin cell would be almost as big as the entire grand canyon. I don't know if you know the Oregon Trail, which is around 4000 km long, but the width of a single wrinkle on one of the fingers of the girls is as long as that, and 10 times as deep and wide as the grand canyon. Like damn, that's really small. It would take an average human 24 years to travel the diameter of a nipple. And it would take 62 years of non stop swimming to cover the length of one sweaty foot, and 39 years to 'swim' around a greasy anus.
Date: March 22 2015 5:35 PM Title: Let's destroy them together!
I love these kinds of stories! It's a shame there aren't more of them out there c:
I think it would be awesome if she fiddled with the elite 50 control tablet, and increased the strength of the barrier so that susan's sister could play with them like marbles :3
But that's just me! I love this story, and can't wait to see where you take it next!
Author's Response:
I also love stories like this, which is why I decided to write one. I wish there were more like them around, but sadly there are not.
Also Susan's little sister will have a role to play with the elite 50 soon.
[Report This]Date: March 02 2015 10:30 PM Title: Let's destroy them together!
Nice! The surprise part with Raquel and Reika. I really like how each planet has its own barrier that can either be left intact or destroyed in an instant. Keep going!
Author's Response:
Thanks! That part involving Raquel and Reika was a last minute thing I didn't intend on including in this chapter and thought of it after I was about to end Reika's part. I am glad it popped into my head, because I think it was an interesting thing to include.
[Report This]Date: March 02 2015 2:25 PM Title: Let's destroy them together!
Great stuff as always.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I hope to bring out another good chapter soon.