Reviews For The Elite 50
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Reviewer: TarTar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 25 2015 8:40 PM Title: Chloe vs Emerson

I'm glad that Chloe is the type of character that really wants to have some fun with the planets! I'm sure that she would love for Raquel to let her have some more planets of her own.

Also I wonder if Raquel actually had some candy in her room, or if it was her plan all along to let Chloe find the Elite 50 ;)

As for Raquel, perhaps she needs some more alone time with some planets after being interrupted before... Maybe she should get some tips from Reika and her experience? hint hint ;)

Anyway, do your own thing. Please don't stop doing what you're doing!



Author's Response:

Making Chloe have fun was what I was going for. I didn't want her to be like the other girls and destroy the planets for cruel and/or sexual reasons, since I didn't want a character this young to be sexualized. This is why I decided to make her just as destructive, but make her reasons more out of sheer enjoyment.

If you are hoping for Raquel to have a similar experience with the planet, then you will be happy about what happens in the future. I hope you continue to support this story till it's end and I will try my hardest to make this story enjoyable.

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