Reviewer: Kosmita Signed [Report This]
Date: January 19 2015 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 2

Well, I'm hooked :) I'm eager to see how the events lead up to the prelude. The violence, crush, and unaware themes are great as well. I thought that sacrifice in the prelude was pretty fucking metal. Can't wait to see more!

Author's Response:

hey, thanks! the prelude was something i just threw together one night on my phone at work, and i thought, 'well, then what?' glad you think it's metal. i think blood and giantesses are pretty fuckin metal too.

Reviewer: youre_my_slave Signed [Report This]
Date: January 19 2015 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 2

Hm... You're good... Still not exactly sure what they plan to do with her... Given their cannibalism of the sacrificed girl, I still think they may plan to eat the Virgin from the inside out. My only other idea is that although they're tiny people they function similar to tapeworms, forcibly entering a host and holding a parasitic relationship with them until they're extracted or the host dies from malnutrition. For me the second theory seems more likely, considering what Jawm said about her considering keeping him and Zdua as pets. It wouldn't make sense for him to think that if the ritual killed her immediately/induced trauma that would kill her in a few hours. Unless he wasn't around for the last ritual...

Author's Response:

Well, you're right about one of those things. whatever the outcome or method to how they 'use' her, it doesn't bode well for the Virgin, that's for sure. I'd love to say more, but i really want to finish this story- i have a million billion stories in outline form that will never see the light of day. Ironically, most of them are super gentle gts stuff. This was just kind of a catharsis for me. I read your bio as well- you're way into violent stuff; im glad this story could fill a hole for you (haha its funny because vagina). Anyways, thanks as hell for reading- looking forward to what you think of future chapters (when they finally roll out)