Reviews For The Virgin
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Reviewer: Michael11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 16 2016 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 9

Awesome story so far!

Really like the characters and the way you describe their thoughts and what is happening : )

 

In this chapter I especially liked the vore scene as well how Sigdaw felt about her death in the end.

Also intrigued by the virgin in the way she reacts to this situation and I wonder what else she will do and if Jawm is able to snap her out of her killing spree.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! The switching author persepctives to show characters' trains of thought was something new I thought I'd try- I found it difficult to try and do it all from one POV but it ended up sounding clunky. The Virgin is an interesting character- I dont think she's going to snap out of it any time soon :) anyhoo, thank you for reading and I am glad that you are enjoying the story so far.

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