Reviews For The Virgin
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Reviewer: Michael11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2016 5:15 AM Title: Epilogue

"Who knew? Who cares, she concluded."
: P
"She softened her approach slightly, feeling the return of a more gentle her."
: )

"She told him."
but not the readers : / ^^

"But, the again,"
Typo

Really like how these two talk : )

"He laughed."
"He fucking laughed, thought she."
Good bye...

"She just simply couldn’t handle everything that had happened."
: (

"Rose?"
!!!!!

Have fun James ; )

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Awesome Story versusterminus7
Hope we'll see the Virgin again = )



Author's Response:

it was actually super liberating to write dialogue again. i spent this entire fuckmothering story describing shit i had to stop and think what a normal conversation consisted of. 

yeah, her name is rose. it was almost mary but that seemed overboard with the whole biblical theme.

Im really happy you enjoyed this! thank you for reading.

Reviewer: HOZANGA Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03 2016 9:16 AM Title: Epilogue

Loved it! Although I was really hoping for some boot crush action.. But, like I said, awesome story, nevertheless!

Author's Response: well I'm not averse to boot crush, but it is alllll about strappy gladiator sandals. Just sayin :)

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