Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 29 2015 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 9: Vagabond Act Two

Matt kinda came off as a dick in this chapter, but she WAS being a little unreasonable. I mean its not like Matt was just killing those guys just because, they were going to kill him and Amelia, what could he have done?

Also did Amelia just say that she's seen humans killed before? And did she just justify it by comparing sentient beings like humans being eaten to animals like deer being eaten? Little iffy on that, I don't think thats the same thing.

I mean if deers could talk back or reason with humans I have little doubt that we stop eating them. I don't think many people could stomach the prospect of eating something that could talk back...

Anyway, overall it was a good chapter. In summary, Amelia was being unreasonable and Matt was kinda being a prick.

Author's Response:

I think i was going for how naive amelia is, and the prospect of matt being this really efficient murderstabbydeath machine kind of scares her. As far as deer compared to humans, I dont necessarily disagree with you, but look at it from her perspective- she comes from a culture that has no problem with eating this animals that look exactly like them, just scaled down. Her comparing it to a human eating a deer is her searching for a simile, id think. Also, people have eaten people for a long while in our world. nature supes cray cray bruh. Anyways, thanks for reading. I enjoy your input.