Date: February 12 2015 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Birth Of A Paragon
I think I'll like Agent Fredericks, he seems like a man who knows how to enjoy life. Will we see Shelly and Bobby again?
Author's Response:
Yeah they will pop up at some point, not sure when but they will come back. For Agent Fredericks he is a man who became a walking tub of lard through no fault of his own but has seen the bright side to what happened. Maybe Jessica can learn from him.
Date: February 01 2015 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Birth Of A Paragon
I like this start, Jessica seems more real here, her grief over suddenly becoming a giant makes her easier to relate to when you also throw in her sham date.
With over 200 years of history to tell, there is an entire series of stories to be found in the years between Jessica joining Park and the main story.
Author's Response:
Yep that was what I was going for. There is a lot of material set before the main series and we'll get through it in time.