[Report This]Date: February 21 2015 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 2
No kidding, but this became already one of my favorite stories of the last months. Loving it to the last bit so far, fantastic writing style, great plot, amazing details, not rushed, just perfect. I love how you are capable to write that actually short event in such a detailed way. Most authors lack this and rush on the fun parts. So amazing how you let the boy exterminate without even knowing that other "ant", loved the idea so much of the shoe just because of moving it just a tiny bit on the floor, coming in contact with the ants half body and reducing into a smear, letting it still live but in total pain and humiliation, until the shoes slams down a 2nd time, this time transforming the former ant to a paper thin, no not even that thick, layer of bug guts. I imagine his antennas or a leg still twisting and glued to the underside of the shoe when it rises again. Fantastic story so far <3
Author's Response:
I’m glad your enjoying it so much Zol. I really tried to focus more on the dramatic side of things. I always read stories where the main character shrinks, then, next chapter, are placed into some bad situation. Don’t get me wrong, I love those types of stories too, but I just wanted to write something different. I’m glad its working well.