Reviewer: zol Signed [Report This]
Date: February 22 2015 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 3

Thank you so, so, so much for this story. It was just, wow... It's by far in my top5 of best stories of the last 3 years on this site. I wish I could show you my emotions of how happy it made me read this plot, and the ending was just amazing. It's so upsetting for me to find what I really enjoy, or actually, not being able to find it, because most stories are gts based, by a high manority of I would sad 98%. You totally made my day, and seeing the other reviews, a lot of other readers too, and that's amazing. Im sure there are lots of other people out there enjoying this type of stories, but dont say anything or just dont review. But I'm sure you also made their day. I'm so happy after what you wrote back, and I have to applaud you too, for that you stood "strong". Because you have no idea, how many times Ive seen it happen before. And I was so upset and mad at that other guy, who literally review like "amazing story Id love see gts stuff in the next chapter :p"... geez :'( It's always the same when an author steps forward and risks "crisitm" on here publishing a male based plot, and all the "weirdos" reviewing amazing story... but please add gts bla bla blub. It's the most rude thing you could do, and still people do it all the time. And whenever I see that, I breaks my heart, because mostly the author even follows that, and a once good plot totally gets destroyed for me. So I have to thank you again for this too, that you didnt follow that. Thank you sir, this story was amazing, and I loved every tiny bit of it. Especially the ironic ending was amazing, how he got "rescued", but before his arm was stepped on. I could had imagined his arm/insect leg being smeared to a pulp, and the boy maybe noticed that, and he thought it was a good thing to put the poot ant out of its "misery". I also imagined the last step not being totally outbalaned over the whole "ant", and its head still beeing intact, ooz flooding out of a crack, the antenna twisted and one half broken hanging over the head, the body a total mess of greenish brown ooz smeared and mixed with dust and sand particles to the rubbery sole, and the boy finally walking out of the bathroom, and the still alive and twisting ant, just his head part of the alive being, would be tortured again for some minutes, of experiencing the shoe going up and down in high speed towards the ground, and the boy just lazily sitting in his room on his computer, and again moving his shoes over the ground here and there, and one of that tiny movements, pressing momentum on the tiny dot under the sole where the head was still "living", and popping it too. I also have to say, that I loved so so so much more the idea and fact the boy wearing shoes, I imagine them old wearn out, I love converse sneakers for example so much. It's a so much more thrilling concept than "just" socks for example, or barefeet, which dont add that much humiliation that a shoe does, with it's dirty and rubbery sole, its threats under it, where the ant could fit inside one of those if its lucky, and so many more reasons. Sigh... thank you for this story man. Really. I hope youll write again plots like this in the future, male 12-16 giants are my favorite genres of shrinking and transformation stories, especially unaware is the best concept. I always loved ant/flea sized transformation the most, or shrinking sizes of around 1/32"-1/8" in a range of ant to dust particle or lint. I found a new favorite author and a new favorite story, I already printed it as a pdf and saved it in my favorite stories folder :] Keep up the amazing work!!! And have a nice day.

Author's Response:

Wow, when you write a review you go all out.

I’m so glad you liked the story though. Honestly, I was the same way for a while. I enjoy writing stories that are more male giant related, but there were so many gts stories that it seemed like it wasn’t the place. Plus, every once in a while I would find a story that was male giant, and so many people would write such stupid things. Honestly, I don’t mind if someone asks for something, like for me to include female giants, but when people comment literally just to put down an otherwise good story, that I didn’t like.

Anyway, once again zol, thank you for the elegant review (and fun little alternate ending summary). I hope I can write more things of this nature soon.