Date: August 19 2019 3:20 PM Title: Mrs. Smith
Can’t believe it’s almost been 2 years since the last update. How time flys by. Idk how many I’ve reread this story but it’s still one of my favorites. This whole chapter with Mrs. Smith was awesome!
Don’t know if you’re still active here but just wanted to say that this story is just amazing. Hopefully all is well with you 👍
Date: August 28 2017 1:55 PM Title: Mrs. Smith
Love each chapter of this. It's going in the right direction with Jay getting more and more helpless. My favorite parts are the ending of chapter 11 with Jay accidently sucking on Darcy's breast, and chapter 10 when Darcy and Emily undress Jay. Being controlled by two younger girls nicely emphasizes how helpless and vulnerable Jay is at his diminished size. I would love to see more interaction between Jay and Darcy and Emily. Maybe they should teach Jay a leason by "giving in" and not making him wear a diaper - instead, they should just leave him naked, an even more embarrassing situation than wearing a diaper and baby outfits.
Date: August 24 2017 2:48 PM Title: Mrs. Smith
Haha! That ending! I don't blame Jay, once you live out your dream like that, you start to look at boobs differently.
I was hoping Mrs. Smith would have made Jay lick her pussy and force him down there since his dick was too small for her.
Still, I loved the dominance that Mrs. Smith displayed in this chapter. Love how she toyed with Jay in the beginning, and then became horny as Jay was in her arms.
At one point, you said "Ray" instead of Jay.
I hope we get to see more of Mrs. Smith. I want to see her be a bit more creative on how to handle him. Maybe she should keep him swaddled so Jay can't move. Maybe, she can hold him from his crotch area so Jay gets teased. She can playfully sit on his face gently as a reminder of how big she truly is.
Best chapter so far, and I can't wait for Jay to return to her!
Thanks for catching that Ray instead of Jay. Should be fixed now. I haven't had a chance to proofread this chapter yet so it's probably littered with typos