Date: May 13 2015 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 17
Good story, all around. I really like the ending. Who would want to get their freedom and screw nine literal goddesses on a regular basis?
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback. Yeah, that would be a tough gig!
[Report This]Date: May 13 2015 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 17
Yes! Jack is alive and free!
I would love to see Clarissa have some fun with Jack. Maybe Selene too.
The dreams started to be totally random, but I think now I'm starting to understand it.
This story just keeps getting deeper. Now there's this mind connection with Jack, Garth, and Clarrisa.
I can't believe Abagail just ate her father like that. Sure he didn't love her, but didn't she love him? I didn't see that vore coming.
Now Jack is fullsized, which must mean that they trust him. So if he is free and full-sized, could he just leave? Well, he said he owes Hilde and Selene some time, but other than that it sounds like he is free to go.
Either way, it sounds interesting and I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback Tom Speedy. There are several avenues available for me to continue this thread, but for the moment I will more than likely address a couple of other stories I am developing (they will tie back to this story in some way. I hope to have something within the next week or so) Cheers
[Report This]Date: May 12 2015 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 17
WOW!!!!!
If this was your debut story, Duggernaut, it was an epic one. And you are going to find it frigging difficult to equal it. Let alone, top it!
But, don't be scared of trying to do so, anyway. :-)
Author's Response:
Appreciate the props Carycomic. I appreciate that you think I've set the bar high, but it gives me something to strive for. i hope to have something new in the next week or two. Cheers