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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 29 2015 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 18

Hilde is like an assassin. Silent and swift and leaves no evidence around. Except she shrinks people instead of killing them.

You do a great job introducing characters.

I feel for Cade. Good rep, then one mistake leads to his downfall. All of a sudden, he strives to redeem himself and this case is not helping him.

Hilde is having fun on the other hand. She is a cat just toying with her mouse, ready to pounce when Cade is vulnerable or considered a threat.

Who knew that a simple robbery would lead to all this? This story just keeps getting bigger and deeper!

I cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Hey tom,

 

Hilde is certainly someone not to be trifled with, not so simple a robbery, :)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28 2015 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 18

An excellent set-up for the sequel. Bravo!

Author's Response:

Thanks, we have to see where it goes from here.

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