You have me completely hooked! Don't let clarisse die please :/ jack and her make a nice couple.

So far this has been one of the best stories I've read on this site, so I'm longing for the next chapter! 

First off, what a chapter! It felt twice as long as the previous one.

Second, I love Hilde's outfit. All black and tight. Good choice. It gives a hint of sexy, but deadly.

Hilde not in the mood? Hmmm. She really wants Cade, and only Cade. I thought she wouldnt mind an appetizer, but guess she has a higher priority on Cade. She knew that random guy was tempting, but I like her attitude. Job first, then have her fun.

I bet if Hilde ignored that ripped guy one more time, he would have grabbed her. She probably sensed it too, so good move to push him and let him know who is boss.

Geez, Clarice is horny. She wants him all the time. I loved the facesitting scene. That was a nice touch.

Jack had to refuel because of continuous sex. Clarice is even hard to satisfy. You would think that she is new to this stuff, especially since she is so young and that she would reach her climax earlier, but she seems very experienced. Not a good or bad thing, just interesting.

Clarice seems like that typical teen. She is kinda reckless, not just with her driving, but with also her decision making. She wants a tatoo just because Hilde has one, and also she doesnt realize hints of danger when strangers (to her) ask her to get in a car. Yep, recipe for disaster.

I like Jimmy. Old acquaintance, similar to Cade, and seems like one of the good guys.

Trevor, man he just wants to get paid. So anxious to get the job done. However, I feel like that will be his last job.

Cade, Poor Detective Cade. He keeps getting involved with powerful, crazy people. First Hilde, then Arvin.

Speaking of Arvin, I started liking him as he was introduced into the story. At first he wanted answers, and thats understandable. However, when he threatens Clarice, thats a big no-no. First off, that makes Jack pissed at Arvin. Second, it makes all those women with "magic" pissed at Arvin. And when you piss off those women, its game over. I just have this feeling that the other women will sense Clarice's pain and location and avenger her.

For example, Selene. Wasnt she following them? I bet she watched the entire thing unfold, and is probably now debating what to do. Of course, she could just walk in and shrink em all down.

Is Clarice dead? Or did she just pass out or something? I couldnt tell, but at least we know that it was Arvin's fault and I think he is going to lose his power soon.(maybe to Selene?)

I love Arvin's reaction to Jack's anecdote. He doesnt believe that lovely women have defeated Jack and Tony and that Jack made it up. Hilde can easily change his mentality. She might "rescue" Cade and punish Arvin. Then she will play with Cade. Or....Arvin will be given to Selene. Now that would be entertaining.

Great stuff as always, and I cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Hey Tom, thanks for the reviews, curious to see where this might go. Clarice has only just been awakened and is supercharged and now she is shot...