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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 16 2015 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 21

It's been so long that I don't remember who Garth is. I guess he is the creator of the dark magic or something. He seems powerful, and he doesn't care about being held against his will. In fact, he embraces it like a challenge. Some might call him crazy, but I find it entertaining, especially when he messes up their minds.

He made Clarrissa think she was pregnant, or Clarrissa expected something special and the feeling of pain created by Clarice was compared to that of pregnancy.

Now there is this connection between these women. I knew there was one, but it seems like they can all feel it in their genitals? Maybe. I mean, if it was pain that Clarissa felt, then a pain in the lower abdomen was the signal.

So when Selene felt it, she gave a loud gasp, which is probably because she felt it down there as well.

Then Selene just pushes the bouncer, similar to Hilde pushing the other random dude from an earlier chapter. Since it was in a club, I wonder if there were any witnesses to the bouncer becoming unconscious.

And not just that. Selene herself is attractive, I'm sure, and sure that her alone can attract attention, and the combination of an attractive lady plus her being able to drag the bouncer like that.....wouldn't that raise suspicion? Then again, it's a club, so they might be all drunk.

You know, I always overlook this, but I appreciate the fact that you put bolded text to identify a new event in a chapter. It really helps when I look over it.

Hilde's house has been a place of transition. First, with Cade, he set himself in a trap by revealing his presence in her house, and now he got captured within that house. Jack is now tiny, and in another house that belongs to a superior woman.

Is Garth still inside Clarrissa? At that dining table, Garth said he wasn't shrunk, but rather the women were all giantesses. So if Clarrissa is now normal sized, does Garth shrink down as well? I guess that makes sense.

Yes! Thank you Clarrissa for keeping Jack small! And thank you for giving him to Selene! (I wouldn't mind Clarrissa keeping Jack to herself, but she already has Garth). Now I'm ready for some fun with Selene, especially with her playful, yet seductive attitude.

All the women get a mini man, and Hilde gets 2. One for sexual interrogation, and the other for sexual integration.

Great stuff as always, and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Hey Tom, next chapter should be coming pretty soon. Arvin, Jack & Selene will be featured. Fleshing out other characters will continue to be prominent in the next little too. hope you continue to enjoy.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 15 2015 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 21

I have no doubt that Selene will probably finally meet her kinky match in Jack. But, I have to wonder if even his hyper-libidinous stamina would make Serah defrost.

Author's Response:

The next installment for this story should be along shortly and Selene has a surprise for Jack. :)

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