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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 25 2015 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 22

Man, at this rate, this story has the potential to reach 100 chapters! I mean, we are still meeting new people each chapter! It's not a bad thing of course, but rather incredible.

I can't tell who the villian is or if there is even a villian. At first I thought it was the girls who caught Jack, then I thought Hilde, then Arvin and his crew, and now it looks like Lily and her crew(or circle).

I thought Selene was horny enough to use him before getting in the car, but now she has patience and decides to show off Jack.

Hmm, Jessa doesn't sound as sexy as Selene, and she uses what I think as a (past friend) excuse to get a chance to have fun with Jack. Also, I think she works with Lily. I don't trust her.

Lily sounds super sexy and deceptive. I love her attitude. She played off her disappointment like a champ when Selene said that Clarrissa ordered for Selene to have Jack. Also, by Lily pursuing Selene, this means that Lily isn't exactly intimidated by Clarrissa's decision.

Jack cussing out Jessa was funny. I bet if it was any other tiny, he would've been swalllowed on the spot. Jack only lives becuase he is special.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 24 2015 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 22

Oh, shit! It looks like these circles have an underlying rivalry that would make a gang war with the Outfit look like a 1960's love-in.

Author's Response:

There certainly may be some unresolved issues between different circles...

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