Date: August 04 2015 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 25
Please continue writing!! you are so good and I dont waant this amazing series to just kind of fade off like all the other half finished ones. Also when will the book be finished and cant wait for more on serah and her love interest in the legion!! keep up the awesome work!!
Author's Response:
I will keep writing, just feeling a little weary juggling a half dozen balls in the air at the same time. It wouldn't be right to just leave it.
[Report This]Date: August 01 2015 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 25
I just had a horrible thought. What if Lily's circle are the true brains behind behind the Hidden Path? Puppet masters, as it were, using plutocrats like the late, unlamented Halston to circumvent this Covenant?
Author's Response:
That would be a great twist but I think I'd need a 'do over' to plant some subtle seeds alluding to the link. Maybe though. Not sure how much is left in the tank for this tale though :(
[Report This]Date: July 31 2015 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 25
More people are reviewing your newer stories. I hope they review this one as well.
Cade just doesnt get it. When the same mysterious woman shows up at your place and is super confident, then you shoukd be afraid, not laugh. Golden eyes are a bad sign. Hilde will sure enjoy him.
Cade- "How does a woman like you carry me up here?"
Hilde's thinking- "I shrunk you, put you inside me, and walked over here while you gave me pleasure".
I wish that was her answer. I want Hilde to scare Cade. I mean, he laughs at her threats!
Wow, that explains everything. Jessa got Selene a replacement tiny man. A perfect substitute.
Speaking of substitute tiny guys. I remember one story that a woman was going to have sex with her tiny husband. The husband hated it, becuase he was cheating on him for another girl. The other girl wanted him to divorce his wife and stay with him, so she got a replacement tiny man to take his place. She took the husband secretly and the wife had sex with the replacement guy. She had no idea it was him, becuase his face was all wet in lots of sticky fluid. (I love stories that use substitute men).
Im not sure if Jessa knows Jack's value or if she is trying to downvalue Jack to Selene.
I wonder what is happenning to Jack. Especially now that no one will be looking for him. Selene totally bought that decoy and beleived Jessa.
I also wonder how Selene is going to explain the "mishandle" on "The hammer". (Im not good with wordplay as Carycomic, but thats what I got.)
I cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Hey Tom thanks for the review. I hope others can find enjoyment in this story like others but it is pretty complex and involved so who knows. Not sure how much longer for this one maybe sooner than later.