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Reviewer: pigeon-kun Signed [Report This]
Date: November 08 2020 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 1

I love this story !!!

Author's Response:

Thank you! Feel free to expand on your review and check out some of my other stories, including "Rescued By A Pageboy." 

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 12 2020 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 42: The Toy and the Trainer, Part 2

Oh yes! Loved this chapter. 

I don't know who is luckier, Ryan or Jessica. 

One thing I wanted to ask, are you ok with other authors writing stories for your Rebalancing verse. 

My question and your responce in the previous chapter review got me and a friend thinking of ideas in exploring those aspects in the rebalacing verse (that is, if you are ok with it)

You seemed to have a great outline, or at least a solid plan for exploring it in future. 

This is also another reason I wish GTSWorld had a DM system (among other things), it would make communication so much easier. 

Author's Response:

Actually, things might get a little rocky for Ryan and Jessica... 

I would welcome any new stories set in the ROS universe. Just post a response here and I'll try to incorporate it into the series. If you haven't already, try to read up on some of the other stories in ROS so you get an idea of what is "canon" (and that has evolved somewhat over time). 

A few more points:

The Goddess set out to reverse many of the problems each sex faces, often by giving them the other side's problems. For example, giving women a lengthened fertility with a second womb in the back and giving young men a biological clock that points many of them toward mature women. She wants no one to be lonely and wants to replace fear, jealousy and scarcity with sexual abundance.  She wants men to be humbled and non-toxic and women to love strongly and rule the world and push it toward love, sex and intimacy. Have fun! 

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 08 2020 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 41: The Toy & The Trainer Part One

Another great chapter :D


one thing I keep thinking on, how would the rebalancing affect Gay men ? Or Transgender women ?

Author's Response:

Thanks for the compliment! SPOILER ALERT ahead!

Someone actually wrote a ROS-based story in which gay men and women basically took over the world because straight men were too small and straight women too horny. "Rebalancing the Sexes: The World After." I'd include it in the series if I could find it. I responded to it in "Rebalancing the Sexes: Changing the World After."

Generally speaking, the Goddess of Love is mainly concerned about sexual and power dynamics between straight men and women. It is implied that a woman can shrink a gay man but most are cautious around women... even to the point of arming themselves, according to ROS:TWA. I haven't written a story about a gay man getting shrunk but I think the GOL would view it as nonconsensual, as opposed to a heterosexual male who is assumed to be fair game after the age of 18 if he's unattached. There would probably be punishments for the shrinker, much as there are punishments for women who shrink other women's boyfriends/husbands ("A World of Breasts and Buttocks.")

The addition of "bornsmall" men adds another complication. Boys born out of the back-womb come from different sperm than those born from the front. Given that there are genetic factors involved in sexual orientation, it seems likely that, once things sort out over the next generation, the Goddess has routed chromosomes so that straights are born out the back and gays out the front... thus uncomplicating things down the road. Eventually, gays start out life at woman-scale and stay there, while straights start out at man-scale and stay there. 

As far as transgender women, it's a factor we haven't dealt with. Perhaps the key is hormones, which would mean that someone who is receiving medical assistance to transition to male would shrink, while a man transitioning to woman would not. Still haven't given it much thought.

Thanks for your thoughtful question. 

Reviewer: tuyulboy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 25 2018 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 35: Brothers from Each Other's Mothers: Austin's Story

just can say ... amazing..

just hope.. more scene about : "When she's home, Carolina makes love to my mom" they need same size relation too..

just hope..

thank alot for share


Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 23 2018 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 33: Thank You Mom, for Giving Me to your Friend

You ended the Mistrress in blue series at the perfect time. I was starting to get a little bored of that so I’m glad to see some new ideas show up.

I love the letter to mom chapter. It’s very interesting to get a guy’s perspective about his situation and then comfortably discuss it with his mother.

This viewpoint is usually not shown as much. I think a scen from Jennifer’s perspective would be much more fun, but the giantess motives are usually obvious so I found this approach interesting.

Glad to see some new ideas being thrown in there. I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I agree that Mistress in Blue was stalling out. I originally planned a longer story arc that included Heather and Anthony and Madison tracking down male traffickers... including a woman who just missed the Goddess' cutoff age of 62 for the MILF  backdoor retrofit... but it got to be too much so I decided to spin it down. 

I really enjoyed writing Stewart's letter. I wanted to give fans of this anthology something to tide them over until I get to my next big idea. I think one key aspect of this short chapter is that although boys and men didn't consent to what the Goddess and the Rebalancing did to them, and although they didn't get to pick out their partners, often it turns out very well! The males know they've traded power for a bit of heartpounding danger and a lot of heartpounding sex. We know that women's sex drives have heightened and expanded in the Rebalancing and that a 40something woman is on fire! But we also need to remember that males still have the same sex drive as ever, and since the Goddess has given men under 40 a permanent case of blue balls and a cement penis, they're as aroused as ever! 

Men traded power in the outer world for power and success in the inner world of women, and all the sexual interest makes them feel like they're in a harem, even with one woman... even if they're sharing a woman with more than one man. All the entryways, all the ways they can plunge into her and plunge their manhoods into her. Of course, the experience of shrinking has made them more aware of and sensitive to a woman's needs, so they work harder to please her... and they like doing it! And isn't it cool lin this world that sons can be so open with their mothers about their male desires, and so much more respectful at the same time? I'm sure one reason is that a woman no longer sees her son's energy as a danger when he's a few inches tall. 

I may write Jennifer's version. It would be longer and more complex, but I think she shares many of the same feelings. 


Thanks as always for your input, Tom Speedy!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 21 2018 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 30: A Mistress in Blue Chapter 11

That was amazing! Love the fast pace of this chapter. Many things happened and I can tell you took some time writing this one.

The first paragraph sums up paradise. Just being inside woman after woman and after the first day, you feel as if you are very experienced because you got so much action. What a position to be in!

I completely agree with Anthony about being more than just used by these giantesses. Being more than just a dildo. He wants them to remember him and he wants them to value him more than any fancy dildo that they can find on the market. If they want some intense pleasure on demand, he wants to be chosen. And I understand that. Awesome!

"Bottomless"? People say that? I don't know, it sounded weird when I read it in my head.

Haha! Lube fights at school? That sounds crazy. Good choice of including that. Shows that boys had many ways to get ready to be shrunk and prepare for servicing a woman.

I like how Candy took the initiative and wanted to work on the clitoris. Women know how to pleasure the clit more then men, so it works out while Anthony does what I like to do and dive deep in Heather's pussy.

Wait, his body created chocolate? Or was her Heather's push? If it was from Anthony, why, and why chocolate?

Is Donna a regular sized woman? I couldn't really tell. I'm assuming she is since she is on the bed and visible from the dresser. It's just that it seemed like she appeared out of nowhere so I thought she was tiny too.

Anyway, I am glad you are back and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thank you for your support!

Remember that Anthony was inside Heather for a long time, and wouldn't have known where she was going. She's in a holding cell with Donna, a full size woman who was arrested for some illegal act committed because she was deprived of a man. Basically 90 percent of the crime in this world (which has far less crime than before the Rebalancing) is committed by women who don't have a man and are eiher trying to get one or trying to deal with not having one. Instead of long jail sentences, the police are using sexbatons and their mistresses to rehabilitate these women, to "bring them within the Law of Love." 

Yes, tiny men in the ROS universe taste like chocolate. Just as women taste like honey. All of their juices. This encourages women to keep them around. 

I'll probably wrap this up in another chapter or two. There are other mature giantess/ younger men scenarios I'd like to write. I was planning a longer story arc with Heather and Madison and Anthony tracking down man traffickers, but that will have to wait for another story. 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 09 2018 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 29: A Mistress in Blue, Chapter 10

That was a very good descriptive history lesson. I always wondered how Candy got shrunk. And she is right. She is super horny and she can't help herself.

I disagree with Anthony needing to workout. Sure, he could get stronger and staying in shape is important, but I love the idea of being abused by a giantess pussy and being helpless inside a giantess vagina. Letting it control me and trap me sounds very sexy. I don't think I would ever fight it, haha. I would let it consume me.

Also, I'm not so sure about Anthony getting this dominant side to him as he fucks Heather's backpussy. I think Candy wants Anthony to act dominant so Heather will get mad and get rid of Anthony so Candy can have Heather to herself.

I think Anthony should play like a prisoner and have Heather lock him up in her front pussy. Yeah, that sounds nice.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Anthony needs to work out, because Heather works her pussy out, as we'll reference in a chapter or two. Heather also knows, and we're beginning to reveal, that Anthony's job involves a lot of work. He can't let himself disappear in all the vaginas he'll be visiting, LOL. 

Candy does feel concern about losing Heather. But she also knows that Heather wants a man who will at least give her a bit of a struggle in front before surrendering. Heather was married to a cop. Think about the types of young men who are likely to fall for older women in this universe. (Obviously you have.) No doubt more than a few see that lustful older woman as a sugar mommy and look forward to a life as a soft, chubby sex toy, figuring they're set for life. Heather doesn't want that. 

Candy is also concerned about a bit of a submissive streak in Heather when she's done in the backdoor. This will play out in a future scenario. 

Thanks for your continued interest! 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 12 2018 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 27: A Mistress in Blue, Chapter 8

I remember why I didn't review last chapter. It was the Madison chapter and I kinda just glanced it over and I think I didn't much to review.

However, this chapter was awesome!

I loved the backdoor sequence. How it made Anthony feel as if it's the real deal that older generations talked about.

Then, the dissapointed Heather made things interesting. I like things that surprise me and this did. Means that Anothny will be even more exhausted than this time.

Lol, that finale. I forgot about that woman. Now that's funny. I love her desperate need for love.

Great to see you back. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Great to see YOU back, Tom!

The backdoor sequence... before the Rebalancing, women viewed backdoor as degrading and men lusted after it. Now women lust after it. Some men feel degraded, knowing that they're no taller than the cleft between the buttcheeks and their manhoods are only big enough to fill such a tiny place. But Anthony and others who can still learn know that it's just a humbling thing. When men are humbled, they learn respect for the awesomeness of female sexuality in the ROS universe. 

Think about what Anthony has been through to lose his virginity. Think of the emotions stirred in a woman when she is penetrated for the first time. Anthony has been penetrated, not by an appendage, but by the juices and energy of these women. He feels some of the vulnerability women felt before the ROS on their first occasion 

Heather knows that Anthony is very desirable. She can't help but stare at him even though she's trying hard to be distant. She knows the temptation would be for Anthony to go soft with an indulgent MILF. Heather wants and needs Anthony to be strong and smart to be her Sexbaton, partly to make up for what she lost with her husband. She needs Anthony to be as loyal as a police K-9 and as reliable as a service weapon. 

As for Candy/Stephanie's sudden appearance, remember the saying that "when the student is ready, the teacher appears." Yes, Anthony is male and Candy is female, but both are Heather's sex toys, and Candy knows the territory much better than Anthony right now. He needs her to melt Heather's heart and fulfill the destiny that stirred in his heart when he stared at a policewoman's sprawling bottom on his bedroom wall. 

Back soon!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 19 2017 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 25: A Mistress in Blue Chapter 6

Damn. That was the sexiest chapter in the entire story so far!

Heather is a goddess! She just controlled and dominated that scene. Best part was when she told him to get inside her and then after some hesitation, Heather shoved him in! That was awesome.

I think I like it when Heather gets a little aggressive and naughty. Instead of telling Anthony what to do, she should just force him to please her.

Madison should be fun to write next chapter, but I can't imagine it being better than this chapter.

Who knows, maybe you will surprise me.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Heather has just decided that she doesn't have to put up with garbage from a man anymore. She doesn't want to hurt Anthony but she is damn sure going to be pleased. 

It's important that Anthony develop his skills, for his own good and because they will actually help both of them in law enforcement!

Because they now look up to women, young men want women they can look up to, Heather knows this and is determined to use that bond to make Anthony the kind of man who can be a policewoman's partner, a new kind of man for the age of the Rebalancing. 

Yes, Madison should be (and have) lots of fun. 

Thanks for your support, Tom!

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 18 2017 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 25: A Mistress in Blue Chapter 6

Wow! What a great series of stories.

I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter.


Author's Response:

Thanks and I hope you'll check out all of the Rebalancing the Sexes stories if you haven't already. "Rescuedby a Pageboy" isn't part of Cougars but it's a similar theme... a young man gets shrunken by a girl his own age who's just out to shrink as many guys as possible, then ends up in the hands of a short-haired MILF coach he thought didn't like men. 



Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 27 2017 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 24: A Mistress in Blue, Chapter 5

That's hot!

Anthony about to be locked up into heaven.

Heather made this chapter awesome. Not becuase of what she was don't about her body, but about what she was telling Anthony while he was shrinking. It felt epic, like his destiny.

Instead of tasting Anthony at half size, they should sit on him and pin him down. I could see Anthony sitting on a tiny chair, and then Heather sits on Anthony's lap, her ass grinding on his crotch. (She has clothes on).

While I'm anxious for Anthony to shrink, I would love to see a foreplay chapter, if possible. They could wrestle, get in see positions for practice, or Heather could simply wrap her legs around Anthony to tease him.

What happened to that tiny girl? Isn't she still there? Also, could Anthony ride in those panties like the little girl. (I forgot her name.) Except, Anthony should be tied to the front of her panties while her pussy interrogates him.

So many ideas as Anthony is shrinking. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

It was all Heather could do to stay clear-headed enough to say those things to Anthony! She has needs too...

Sorry to say that Anthony will open the next chapter already shrunk. But there will be many hot and playful moments with Heather. 

I think Anthony will not only get a ride, he will get to meet Candy, the "girl" who is actually a former detective who got shrunk. She's probably around 30 and wishing she was big so she could be a MILF goddess too. 

Stick around for more! 

Reviewer: tuyulboy Signed [Report This]
Date: November 20 2017 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 23: A Mistress in Blue, Chapter 4

i love this chapter.. two tall woman with one tiny men..

i hope heather and madison.. more naughty..

thanks for share..

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 20 2017 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 23: A Mistress in Blue, Chapter 4

Yes! I like it when Heather is in charge. I never much cared much for Madison so I was hoping she wouldn't get to dominate they much. Interesting that Heather and Madison were kissing and getting really close tho.

Lucky Anthony. He gets both of these women to venture into and what's cool is that Heather knows Anthony's dream. Imagine if your girlfriend/wife knows exactly what your sexual fantasy is and she surprised you with it. That's the dream life right there.

With so much story about these characters getting so close, I hope we have more than one chapter where things get sexual.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: I promise you more than one sex chapter. In fact the first is already posted!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 12 2017 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 22: A Mistress in Blue Chapter 3

I should have know that this was the trio. I thought Madison was going to have her own adventure, but actually, she is joining Anthony with Heather.

Heather, once again is a goddess. Asserting dominance over these two young people. I like how she wanted to "confiscate him". Nice touch.

When Heather lectured Madison, I thought she was going to send Madison away, but instead she welcomed her to her group, which was nice.

Madison had a lot of confidence and Heather was right. Girls don't really have that much courage to just walk up to guys like that. That fear she talks about is true and I thought it was cool to listen about their differences.

Well, Anthony got his wish. He is going with Heather. Personally, I don't care much for Madison at the moment. Maybe I'm just too attracted to Heather like how Anthony is. Love this group.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thank you Tom!

Remember this about Madison: Girls don't have that much courage in OUR universe, for good reason. In this scenario the young men have been reduced to half size, and will soon be dildo size or smaller. Madison came of age after the Rebalancing and never got that lecture about always letting Mom know where she was and being very careful about guys. Anyone who could have done her harm is harmlessly stuffed in some other woman's panties, channeling his sexual energies toward the worship of his mistress and the fulfillment of the GOL's vision. There's no reason for Madison NOT to take the initiative. Heather doesn't want her to stop being proactive. It'll probably help her if she decides to join the force. Madison just wants her to be aware of how lucky she is to be born when she was, and to appreciate the power she has. She needs to master her hunger to shrink a man, and to have a tiny man inside her, because if she doesn't, by the time she's 30 it'll consume her. She needs to learn to enjoy men like a fine dark chocolate, not a bag of M&M's! But I am confident she  will learn and will redeem herself. 

Anthony, on the other hand, has a lot of reason to be fearful. He didn't know he'd end up with the policewoman he'd fantasized about. Madison came close to shrinking him by queening him. His behavior, as you'd expect of someone who hit puberty right around the time of the ROS, is a mix of old and new: a young man of old's bravado mixed with a new caution and more than a little fear, although he'd never admit it. Sex is more like getting ready for jumping the Grand Canyon than the nonchalant ballwashing of the past. I am still wondering how Anthony will reveal that Heather was the center of his teenage bedroom fantasies. 

As for Heather, you'll see that she is determined to make Anthony into the policewoman's ultimate friend! And lover! And toy! She wants to dominate these two because she believes that dominating and expressing power through love and lust is the source of a woman's strength after the ROS. She not only is glad women have power, she wants to make the measure of power a different thing than it was during the reign of men. 

Keep reading!


Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 06 2017 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 21: A Mistress in Blue Chapter 2

I like the drama of this chapter. How will Candy be used if Heather finds a new guy.

Candy seems fun, but I hope she doesn't feel like a nuisance to Heather's relationship to her little man.

I'm hoping there are scenes where it is just Heather and Anthony. Imagine her handcuffing him and teasing him. He got her attention, now she just has to get his...

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Candy will be fun, because she will decide that she needs to make sure Heather and Anthony bond. I think Heather has had Anthony's attention ever since he decorated his room with her big bare bum. 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 14 2017 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 20: A Mistress in Blue Part 1

Ooooh! Police officers! Now this is soemthing I like. This kid, I like his thinking, "police property". Haha! I wouldn't go that far, but in that world, I probably would.

This trafficking scandal is interesting but I hope it doesn't take away from the main story. I am hoping to see some police woman have fun with a tiny man instead of giving him away to some other woman.

I always thought that the police women would have their own personal jail cell that they keep on their own bodies. Such as being tied up to the front of their panties, just to tease the men of what they could have gotten if they weren't such criminals to society.

Being a slave to a female police officer sounds hot. Handcuffs, authority, and even has the law on her side. You don't want to mess with women like that and if you're caught, you better enjoy what she puts you through.

This guy has the right mindset and I think he will enjoy being paired up with an officer. I just hope that he gets to stay with them.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Police women will definitely have fun with tiny men in this story. So will others!

Anthony has been dreaming for years of being stuffed inside, or in the panties of, a police officer and his dream is about to come true. There might even be a handcuff scene. 


Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 26 2017 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 18: Changes to Explorer Program

I'm impressed at how quick this chapter was uploaded since the last one. Felt like it was just yesterday.

Hmm. I think there will be a part 2 to this I hope, becuase this chapter felt more like some contract than a story.

I'm guessing this was a setup for another chapter, and I can't wait for that one!

Author's Response:

I am thinking about a story/chapter based on this premise. This chapter was written like a news article, to set things up. Thanks!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 23 2017 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 17:The Shy Boy and the Milk Bottle Bum

This chapter alone felt like a movie. It was touching and I cheered for both of them throughout the end.

Loved how Janet was learning about how her body was different. Also, her describing the pencil test was good too. Gives a good picture of how big an ass truly is.

Caleb felt a little bit too innocent about girls. I would expect him to at least know the basics. He seems clueless like a child which felt off, but I liked how he just enjoyed the experience at the end. I consider myself a shy person at times so it's nice to see Caleb get the attention he deserves.

One thing that I really liked was the suspense at the end where Janet is searching for Caleb after hearing about the shrinking of men. Her trying to contact him and the urgency to find him before other women was making my hair stand up. Intense and I like it.

This is probably the most complete chapter that could stand alone as a story.

I can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response:

Thanks again for your interest!

I wanted the pencil test scene to give a sense of Janet's ass being curvy, large and awesome and I think it succeeded. 

Caleb has a fairly high IQ. His biggest problem is social. He has problems with the usual rules of social interaction which means he has problems with dating. Or no problems since he couldn't get a date prior to ther Rebalancing. He knows a few things about sex but it's all from reading. He blurts out his knowledge in unlikely settings such as his chats with the nurse. He's inappropriate without being fully aware of it, or else he's so full of hormones that he can't stop himself. He's the kind of guy that made the girls say "Ewwwwwww..."

I think he intuited the idea of becoming small to make himself a better lover, perhaps from his own failures at dating making him feel small toward women. Or perhaps the GOL planted it in his head to prepare him for the transition. The irony is, before being shrunk, he was anything but small in that department, according to Janet. 

Janet understood Caleb's awkward nature enough to know that he'd be in a bad way in any sort of "man-harem." She associated him with her sexual reawakening and the changes in her body, as he was the first to notice them, and that knowledge drove her to direct her expanding passion toward him. 

I also wanted to return to how hard it is for these women to deal with their newfound desires. Imaging getting off five or ten times a day for an extended time! Janet tries to do right through her lust. The ROS turns everything upside down so a lot of times, men and women just have to ride their passions and hope it turns out all right at the end. 

Had I told this from Caleb's perspective I might have added more from him about how it felt to be drawn to the large, curvy ass of a 50ish nurse. 

Thanks again, Tom!

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Date: September 04 2017 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 16: Your Perfect Imperfections

Even though it's a short chapter, I like the frequent updates recently. I also, enjoyed how creative this chapter is. You took an article and made it fit into the style of this story.

I found the quotes funny, becuase it sounds almost silly reading quotes about guys loving stuff that most people see as a flaw.

I'm curious about the mention of stretch marks and cellulite. Is this just the article saying this, or is this a thing that's going to appear in the rest of the story. To me stretch marks are not bad, but cellulite, especially if it stands out is sort of a turn off. It makes me wonder if we had the goddess to love change my mind, and soon I would love it.

The survey was interesting becuase it focused on parts that I never thought about. Also, the wider hips is the only part that I actually enjoy on that list. I was looking for a sulty voice option, more experience, care like a mother unlike a bratty teen, and maybe even a little taller option since some women still grow and look taller as they age.

I hope these imperfections don't include pimples or warts. That's a no-no for me,haha. If these guys started worshiping that, I would start laughing.

I like that quote about going through puberty again. The goddess of love changes the sexual thoughts in each male and there is a new lust for older women just as there was a lust for younger women before.

Lastly, I like the use of the blogger, Sean X who was inspiring other tinies to embrace their new life and how they should be drawn to these elder, mature sexy women. He also mentioned 2 other attributes that mature women have: power and confidence. The older women are already ahead in life and have some social standing to make them a powerful and worthy person to the community. Also, their confidence is provided with their experience and with more years under their belt, they know how to handle young men unlike younger women.

Good stuff, and interesting way to describe this world with this creative article.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

As always, I appreciate your input, TS. I like to write these "article" chapters when time or writer's block keeps me from developing a traditional chapter. 

A deep, sultry voice is something I would have mentioned if I rewrote the chapter from scratch. This chapter ended up being about younger men being drawn to visual attributes. Part of the Goddess' mission is to make older women more attractive so they don't have to be alone. She thinks that a woman should be most attractive when she reaches her sexual peak and has experience to go with it. So she's altering some things on the woman's side (making already wide bottoms perkier and more prominent, creating a second womb to drive reproductive aspects to pass along the trait) and altering some of the ways younger men perceive older women. 

I don't think I'll spend a lot of time describing cellulite on MILFs but I wanted to put out the idea of young men being attracted to things that signal age and experience in a woman. There is a slight increase in body hair past 35 as women reach perimenopause, which most women fight. This is due to a change in hormones with estrogen decreasing and testosterone becoming more prominent by comparison. In a world where there is evolutionary reason to leverage the back-fertility of older women, that would be a signal to young men about to shrink that this is a mature woman. 

I think Jason in this "article" is an example of one type of young man who gets shrunk. To one extent or another all, to complete the transition to smallness, men who shrink must become emotionally small. One way to become emotionally small is to shed the emotional mask worn by many men and to become playful. These men want a sexual partner, but they also need someone who can be somewhat maternal toward them. Often a mature woman must take matters into their own hands and shrink them, because they don't realize their own needs. One such character is the man shrunk by Amber's mom in "A World of Breasts and Buttocks." 

Another type of shrunken young man I'll call the "explorer." When he shrinks, he sees women's bodies as great challenges, the way a man might view hiking in the mountains in a storm. This type of young man feels more confident with the storminess of younger women, and is more attracted to them than older women. He becomes emotionally small by experiencing their bodies and emotions the way one would experience nature. 

I continue to bounce story ideas around in my head. I'm still thinking about the policewomen and their "explorer' program for small young men. Thanks for your continuing support!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 31 2017 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 15: Figuring it Out

Interesting to have this educated tiny go into this world and try to get his career started amongst these females.

One thing I didn't fancy was how Nick got handed to Debrorah like it was an arranged marriage. I prefer the wild chase that these women had on tinies. The constant fear of a tiny getting captured is entertaining to read, but that's just me. To be fair, I guess this would be common in such a chaotic state for parents trying to find the perfect woman for their sons.

I loved the presentation scene! The questions and the way they giggled, made me excited! I wished we could have heard the other women ask him naughty questions too. In today's society, if the genders were flipped, that would be sexual harassment, but in this story, it's sexy. Kinda dissapointed that Deborah had to end the fun.

Cool perspective this time. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I can't tell you how much I appreciate your dedicated fandom and input, Tom. 

Maybe some version of the Boycatching for mature women would have worked. But remember they are more mature, a bit slower, especially in heels, and might like something a lot more discreet. 

Remember that Nick asked Mom for help meeting older women, at some point after being disenchanted with the girls in the Boycatching. His mother THEN set up the circumstances that led to meeting Deborah. From Nick's description, it's clear he doesn't feel Deborah was forced upon him. 

I kind of wrote Nick's inner mind thinking how every generation gets tired of the ones before talking about how things were better in the good old days. Nick's no doubt tired of hearing men who remember the world before the Rebalancing of Sexes talk about how things were better when men were big. He doesn't have to get into fights or other dude things to prove his manhood or demonstrate it to females, and he gets (and all men get) a level of attention previously reserved for athletes, movie stars and the likes of Justin Bieber. 

I came up with the idea of older women - younger men when I was trying to create an evolutionary justification for women having two vaginas. Of course I wanted the second vagina so tiny men could still have a place to dip their wicks, as it were. But it needs to have a reproductive purpose to be inherited. So I thought up the idea of a second womb. It would make sense for boys to be born from the back because if they were bornsmall, they could enter the world from that small an opening. Then I decided the second womb should have a diffferent fertile time than the first, to give older women greater sexual value by adding reproductive value. I decided they should birth the tinier sex later because, presumably, raising a two-inch tall boy would be easier than raising a girl to five feet and change. They should have their daughters young, when they have the stamina to keep up.

I did enjoy writing the presentation scene. These women now have all the power, but their desires are driving them so crazy, as men's did when they were the bigger sex, but in such a girly way. I could have let that scene go on forever, but then what a mess to clean up in a single chapter!

Nick's inability to compare his world to some yardstick that's ten times taller than he is is perhaps his most appealing trait. To him, women's lips have always been as big as a torso, women's hair has always been a thicket, women's breasts have always been soft hills to climb on, women's vaginas have always been warm, wet caves, daring him with danger and delight, women's bottoms have always been towering walls of softness, power, and protection, and a pair of panties has always been roof, floor, hammock and home. Love and lust has always been ample in his life and while he doesn't know a lot about the old world, he knows that wasn't always true for men. He is on track to do well in this world of towering women no matter what. 

Thanks again for your support, Tom!


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