Wow! I really appreciate you mentioning my name at the end of the chapter. Thanks!

My predictions are kinda based on the body parts each girl uses. You mentioned making them being different, so I just guessed on the things you didn't show yet.

As for the ideas and suggestions, I don't mind you using them. In fact, I would be glad if you did use them becuase it's usually the stuff that I like.

I'm in the same boat as Scott. Sometimes, you dream about someone, and then when you wake up, you look at them very differently.

The ending was very nice. Asking Haleigh out must feel good, especially when she treated him right and Scott knows how to make her feel good as well.

For your first story, this was very good and beyond expectations. Not much you need to improve on except maybe adding a bit more detail to some scenes. Some parts felt rushed.

Otherwise, you nailed it: good grammar, good spacing, likeable characters, variety of body parts, fast pace(so it's not boring), good ending, intro to characters part. And much more.

By the way, what happened to the deleted scenes? I was looking forward to that.

Anyway, great story, and I can't wait for your next one!

Author's Response:

Deleted scenes are coming soon enough!