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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 09 2015 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 21

I agree with all these deleted scenes. They would all seem random if left inserted into the story.

Usually experienced writers have as many deleted scenes that you have. This is incredible!

Some of the scenes were weird, but definitely entertaining to read.

Once again, great story and I look forward to your next piece of work.

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