Date: July 06 2015 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 1: Life After Carly
Very nice
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: July 02 2015 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 1: Life After Carly
I was gone for a while, came back, and found this little gem waiting for me. Your writing has improved in bounds since the last time I've reviewed, at least in this humble writers opinion. But enough lauding for one day, I've got some questions!
Are you perhaps a psychology major or something? Because Carly's mannerisms remind me of someone I know IRL who suffers from histrionic personality disorder. Or is it narcissistic? Chances are I don't know what I'm talking about. I'm just a semi-buzzed guy trying to give some feedback, maybe figure out how to improve my own writing in the progress.
So yeah, in conclusion, excellent work as usual. Looking forward to the next installment.
Author's Response:
Thanks man, much appreciated.
I don't know the first thing about psychology, though I can see some parallels in Carly's behavior with HPD. As much as she does enjoy being the center of attention, though, it's less about needing it from everyone and more just needing an exceptionally heightened sense of it in a focused aspect of her life - this case, feeling Jack needs her as much as she needs him. She could care less about others at this point.
Date: July 01 2015 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 1: Life After Carly
haven't checked in in awhile. so glad you're continuing with this story.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: June 30 2015 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 1: Life After Carly
Ive been asking more questions than reviewing, sorry about that, the story is great so far, and i just read toy teacher, and was wondering if any of those characters are gonna reappear? Like june or kayla
Author's Response:
Totally fine. Glad you're enjoying the story. I don't want to spoil anything yet, but there will be some definite connections with Toy Teacher characters.
Date: June 28 2015 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 1: Life After Carly
freaking amazing as always. Makes me wish they got ahold fo you to finish Micheal Critons "Micro". (which off topic doing a what if on that adaption, so thanks for the insperation again as always)
I'm excited how this will fit into the rest of the Shrunksmith-verse. I Hope Calrly gets her cumuppences soon.
Author's Response:
Thanks very much. If I'd finished Micro, though, it probably would've been a little jarring when it suddenly halfway through became fetish porn.
Date: June 28 2015 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 1: Life After Carly
This chapter brought up a question i hadnt previously had intill carly talks about her hair. What about jacks hair? Did it gets really long or did carly fibd a way to cut it even though it was micro and super thin?
Author's Response:
Carly would probably have occasionally snipped Jack's hair with scissors, but it still would've been pretty shaggy.
Date: June 28 2015 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 1: Life After Carly
Carly sucks as a character. She's not fun or likable in any way possible and the characters around her are dumb victim types. The smart move was to cut of her limbs and put her in een tank surrounded by mirrors and never talk to her. That's the way to hurt a psychopath/sociopath/narcissist and they can never take revenge on you again. I can't relate with these choices of the characters in this one.
Author's Response:
Well, Carly's not necessarily supposed to be liked; she just is what she is. I'm guessing this is just not the series for you though.
Date: June 26 2015 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 1: Life After Carly
I know youre not into the butt theme but you should add some...maybe a relative or a doctor...just think about it
Author's Response:
The story's action is already planned out, but I will keep it in mind.
[Report This]Date: June 26 2015 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 1: Life After Carly
Wow Carly is tiny?! What a pleasant surprise. I'm digging this so far but if the other blackmails are any indicator I should probably expect some cruel giantess humiliation. At least now Carly will get her comeuppance.
Great stuff Jack and I really liked how 'touch' ended. Well that whole story in general because it was unorthodox.
aaron
PS I'm still looking forward to a time-out sequel and with the possibility of the dad/ex-husband being tiny too with Judy well that's a win/win.
Author's Response:
Yep, Carly was shrunken at the end of Blackmail 3. You're right, there will be plenty of action in this one even though Jack is supposedly safe now.
Glad to hear you liked Touch as well.
Without wanting to spoil, we will definitely be meeting Scott's dad in Time-Out 7.
Date: June 26 2015 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 1: Life After Carly
Wait, so is jack living in the birdhouse? Or is it like a little getaway
Author's Response:
The birdhouse is just so he can lounge outside without worrying about the elements.
[Report This]Date: June 25 2015 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 1: Life After Carly
Jacksmith, you are a very cruel man, making us wait to find out what happened to Carly! :)
So glad to see this continued, Carly is one of my favorite characters, I hope like crazy she regains the upper hand! Very interested to see how this unfolds because obviously, she will be the first person they look for if Jack goes missing, assuming she regains her height.
Great work, can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
I promise the wait won't be long. And I'm pretty sure wanting Carly to regain the upper hand makes you very cruel as well! Thanks for reviewing.
Date: June 25 2015 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 1: Life After Carly
Looks great so far. Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: June 25 2015 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 1: Life After Carly
This sounds good so far- I haven't read all of the other books, because I'm not too keen on the fettish sides of this site, but the way you portrayed Jack in the aftermath of his affair with Carly is spine tingling, and something that I've tried so many times to capture in my own g/t stories. I'm curious to see what's happened to Carly after all this time in her shrunken state- I kind of want to see jack have his well earned revenge. The concept of his ability to shrug off physical pain is also something that you've written so well. I think I will enjoy this story, but in the meantime I'm pumped for the next chapter of 'the freshman' !!! Keep up the great work :)
Author's Response:
I appreciate you giving this story a try. I admit things will get pretty fetishistic as the chapters progress, but I hope to make the characters themselves interesting as well.
Date: June 25 2015 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 1: Life After Carly
How often will chapters be uploaded?
Author's Response:
It will vary. Chapter 2 will go up in a few days.
[Report This]Date: June 24 2015 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 1: Life After Carly
The prodigal sister has returned!
So great to see this back and I am getting a small incline that others will be guest starring in it as we go.
Author's Response:
And like other prodigal children, she's apparently been welcomed back despite all her past sins. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: June 24 2015 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 1: Life After Carly
Has it really been three years since the first story. That's mind blowing. Kinda like Jacks mind right now. Which does suck, because he's basically reliving the other stories.
Amazing first chapter, I've been a fan from the start. Mostly because your a incredible storyteller.
So thanks for the chapter:)
Author's Response:
It's actually been 3 years since the third story ended, and 4 since the first story. :P He is indeed reliving the other stories, and then some!
[Report This]Date: June 24 2015 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 1: Life After Carly
Without spoiling much, how did his parents react when they heard what happened to Jack? I can't remember if it was mentioned at the end of 3.
I can't help but feel like they might feel guilty, since he was in their house as Carly's slave before Carly left for college and they never noticed.
I mean it's not their fault, but they might still blame themselves.
Author's Response:
You're right, I chose not to address the parents in 3. We'll learn more about their response to all this in the coming chapters, so I'll hold off on answering for now.
[Report This]Date: June 24 2015 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 1: Life After Carly
Great first chapter, glad to see Jack and glad to hear he's getting psychiatric help, i hope we see his doctor later.
I also hope we meet his parents and how they feel about what Carly did and weather or not they disowned her.
I also look forward to seeing how Carly is doing in captivity.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing! And we will be seeing all of those things you're wondering about eventually.
[Report This]Date: June 24 2015 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 1: Life After Carly
Welcome back, I'm really looking forward to see how Jack and Sophie's relationship will unravel. Maybe Jack will have a relapse and mistakenly worship Sophie? The return of Chloe? Carly's revenge? Can't wait.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I won't ruin what's coming, but we will definitely be seeing Jack interacting with all three of those girls before the story is over.
[Report This]Date: June 24 2015 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 1: Life After Carly
Oh boy. It's happening, it's finally happening..!
I'm both excited and horribly terrified at what's to come. I'm also interested to see how this'll all tie in with your other stories.
How many chapters have you plan this to be? How many do you have written out already? Is this the conclusion to the series?
Oh, the suspense is already getting to me. Best wishes to Jack.
Author's Response:
It is indeed happening. I don't want to guess a chapter number in case it ends up changing, but it will probably be similar to Blackmail 4. I have about a third of it written. And it will become clear whether this is the conclusion or not as the story progresses. :)