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Reviewer: deviant Signed [Report This]
Date: April 04 2016 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 14: Freak in the Sheets

amazing chapter!  you broke away to the shrink at the best part though ;)

 

i so hope you've got a backlog of this that will dribble out.  you are an incredible writer.



Author's Response:

Gotta leave some things to the imagination. I don't quite have a backlog, but I do intend to slowly but surely finish this thing.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 02 2016 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 14: Freak in the Sheets

Shame on you Jack, SHAME!

 

Making poor Carly suffer like this...I mean...yeah...*quietly sees himself out*



Author's Response:

As tough as I've been on Carly in this story, I think you'll like a couple of the later chapters involving her.

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 02 2016 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 14: Freak in the Sheets

Another great chapter!

 

You know, i am starting to wonder if Dr.Fenton isn't intentionally making these hallucinations go off the rails. 

Though it could just be the PTSD. 



Author's Response:

Ha. Fortunately, I'm not quite mean enough to make the doctor evil when Jack's already got so many other problems.

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