Date: April 07 2017 2:40 AM Title: Tess
this story rocks, can't stop reading
Author's Response:
Awesome thanks for taking the time to give this little story a read and review!
Date: August 01 2015 5:06 AM Title: Tess
Good.
But few emotions ... More tone in danger
Boobs, Ass, Fart
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. I'm trying to found the emotional gravitas in the current of danger. There will be more bobs perhaps some assistance upcoming
Date: July 30 2015 8:09 PM Title: Tess
I'm not sure if Tom is smarter than Tess. And that's impressive if that's true.
Tess is already brilliant. She played that lost eating decoy very well. She also did a good job on making Karolina and her maids stop looking on the ground by stating that she found the earring. Perfect execution!
Janine not into older men. She's already looking for a partner and feels awkward when thinking about Aedin. Perhaps Tom can fill that void.
So the party is finally over! Tom is alone with Janine, Karolina and their maids. (I hope their maids were only their for the party. Wouldn't want them becoming a distraction for Tom. Unless you got something in mind.)
I can't wait to see who finds Tom first. Will it be his lovely girlfriend Janine, or the sexy MILF Karolina? I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: July 30 2015 6:09 PM Title: Tess
Loved it. Keep it coming!
Date: July 30 2015 5:44 PM Title: Tess
If only Tess had just lowered herself to thinking like him. But, now, it's Janine who's most likely to find him, first. And, it remains to be seen whether she'll be flattered...or Tom will be flattened.