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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: September 22 2015 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 5: The Break

The doctor isn't going to ask his name? It's curious the main character isn't given a name. That can be quite a powerful thing in a story on a website such as this one.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 01 2015 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 5: The Break

I bet one of those flavor additives is called "small-spice."
;-)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: July 31 2015 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 5: The Break

Dude!!!!

You need to do some MAJOR re-editing with this chapter BEFORE you post the next one! Separate the different paragraphs of narrative text from both each other and the character dialogue. Otherwise, your next reviews will have a score of one star...at best. :-(

Author's Response:

Oh dear I didn't even notice that until now.  How odd.  I wrote it in the same format before I copied and Pasted but I shall fix it

Reviewer: The Shrunken Scholar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 30 2015 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 5: The Break

The Doctor sure seems nice. Almost too nice... Warning bells are going off in my head.

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