Reviews For The First Born
Reviewer: billyevil Signed [Report This]
Date: January 03 2007 11:27 PM Title: Chapter Five: "Fall seven times, stand up eight"
Date: January 03 2007 11:27 PM Title: Chapter Five: "Fall seven times, stand up eight"
I'm loving this story! Thank you for this chapter.. This is really turning into quite the epic.. thank you for keeping it so voyeur.. I love that!
Author's Response: The voyuer part, i feel will help make him more of a character people care about, later on.