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Reviewer: HuzToru Signed [Report This]
Date: December 15 2015 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow, keep going. This story has a great perspective on Sub and Dom.



Author's Response:

Thank you! That's a big part of what we're going for. 

Reviewer: Klyk Signed [Report This]
Date: December 05 2015 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 1

I have to say that this is really good.

The interaction is more natural then in most stories.



Author's Response:

Well, yeah, it should. 

As I keep telling people, plot is my thing. I try to write erotic, but that's more Choreo's thing. And damn is he good at it.  

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