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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 14 2016 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 16

Well, I don't think she will die, but Sir Geroge has no idea.

I like how Sir George uses wordplay to manipulate Alexa since she has the physical power to manipulate him.

I wonder who will get the best of who next chapter.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: February 14 2016 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 16

Awesome chapter! I love Sir George's deluded bravado and the interaction with Alexa. The dialogue was great as well. You have a knack for this sort of formal and archaic speech. I'm enjoying this story a lot.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the words of praise. It is fun to write for this character. some may think him conceited or egotistical, but his idea of class and rigidity open the door for some interesting interaction.

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